
one of my main characters
this took me days to work on
Lance Frost belongs to me
this took me days to work on
Lance Frost belongs to me
Category All / All
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1280 x 870px
File Size 258.3 kB
So...he killed his parents in rage/hate, but hates people who hate their parents?
And he hates people in general but makes friends and has a gf (and gets emo when she leaves)?
This whole character seems like an impulsive/borderline personality disorder just waiting to go postal on the nearest poor sap who breathes wrong near him...
And he hates people in general but makes friends and has a gf (and gets emo when she leaves)?
This whole character seems like an impulsive/borderline personality disorder just waiting to go postal on the nearest poor sap who breathes wrong near him...
Well at times he regrets doing, hes more like,,jealous for those who have a family and shit and still act like complete asses
well the gf was more like ..**cant my character be your character bf?** adn i said yes xD
i can say that he has 2 faces
and indeed he does have borderline personality now that i have serched what was that xD
well the gf was more like ..**cant my character be your character bf?** adn i said yes xD
i can say that he has 2 faces
and indeed he does have borderline personality now that i have serched what was that xD
Belive it or not the "facts and information" tells his story, background. Which is horribly patch worked together. This character isn't believable at all.. Your character standing alone looks pretty but god awful reading that poorly written crap on the side.. Seriously it's god awful XC
Your character seems to have a very one-dimensional personality. It gives the feeling that the character was made up on the spot (without much thought) as a roleplaying character to satiate a roleplaying partner.
The art of the character isn't bad at all, so don't worry about that. You might want to re-evaluate his personality though and try to give him some depth as there are a lot of superficial yet contridicatary aspects about him.
For example, you've given him moody, introverted, selfish and independant characteristics yet he's hopelessly and completely dependant on his girlfriend.
Some attributes are okay, just some are obviously flawed, I hope I've helped in some way.
The art of the character isn't bad at all, so don't worry about that. You might want to re-evaluate his personality though and try to give him some depth as there are a lot of superficial yet contridicatary aspects about him.
For example, you've given him moody, introverted, selfish and independant characteristics yet he's hopelessly and completely dependant on his girlfriend.
Some attributes are okay, just some are obviously flawed, I hope I've helped in some way.
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