This was a lovely read! I like the subtlety of the changes.

Thank yoooou~ I love the slow burn, changing things bit by bit, the subject not being able to stop it while we're aware of eeeverything that's changing~ Glad you liked it!

Oh, this is a wonderful little story. It's hard to get into Stepfordization sometimes with the idea that it usually pigeonholes subjects into the role of housewife and can feel a little tragic sometimes, but given Raven's role as a jaded loner in canon RWBY, this is a great alternate story, especially with the comments like "little firecracker" and such focusing on her kids. It's a really cute, wonderful story all around of a happier, more kid-friendly storyline.
Not to mention, as feder also described, the changes in this are really well-done for slowly building up to the overall payoff of her housewife image; you can really get a feel for the overall image and it's written with a lot of character. Great work!

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thank you for the kind words. ;w; I was really in the mood for this one when I was going and I just... loved the pacing and everything about it. Plus it's nice to have a positive character change for someone, pssh~ I'm glad you liked it! ♥

No problem. Stepford is always most enjoyable with "fixing" a person's life and making something tranquil and suburban out of it. The writing's incredibly cute with how you phrase a lot of her personality.