This is a text i made for my preliminary exams and i think i'll finish some time aswell. i wish to thank  Aakashi for giving me the idea for it. it's not completely corected yet but i'm working on it.
i seemed to have found a part of the story wich wasn't supposed to be there, but it's removed now and that boring thing is gone.
please give me rewievs on it and how to improve what i've written or ideas of what could happen.