>>♦THE ARTWORK

>Type : Daily Painting - from the "i dont know, more abstract things?

Title: Red Summer
Or (Landscape Orange Red)

>Duration
♦ 3 to 4 hours

>♦STORY

Nothing.

i dont know why i did this.

>Inspiration Sources:

♦ i saw some artwork of an artist called Erik Abel.

> about the technique

♦ Use of many textures
♦Color grading

> about the species

The sun?

>♦GRIPE

i SEE RED

My feelings are dull

>♦CRITIQUE

piece of crap

"awful use of shapes and color"
-Not me

i really wish i could write something more
something that made me laugh or made me cry
but, no, theres only nothingness.

well, actually there's a sort of pain.
but what else?

always more and more,
and theres no sense of true satisfaction

weirdness that echoes in the darkness
i wonder what does it mean?

to be alone in despair
and try to fake happiness

What a job is to bring to others joy
while being in the brink of self-colliision

Why i'm writing this?
What do I want to substract?
The joy that I could not gain from making the painting
I'm trying to get it by writing nonsesical words.

From all the pain and the daily burden
doing this every day, is the last resource i have
that can make me feel alive again.
(I like this the last one hahaha)

>Recommendations

i could'nt extract much joy doing this
in fact even writing this feels very painful

strange.

I need doctor strange.

>♦Score

Overall Quality  maybe 6 or 7, but i feel its worth a 4

The Feel of expression 6/10
Technique 7/10
Anatomy ?/10
Shading 7/10
Construction 5/10
Lighting 6/10
Colors 7/12
Perspective 5/10
Creativity 6/9
Style 7.5/10
Composition 7.4/10
Shapes 5/10
Stroke Flow 6/10
Design 7/10

♦ Negative values

Ugliness 3/10
Boringness 2/10
Level of self-cringeness 2/10

v03 12/05/2019

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