This is Chapter one of a Furry book I'm writing about Dutch. It's a huge ambition to me, and I wanna share the chapter with yous. I wanna know what yous think of it ^~^

I-I know I'm not a great writer, so any tips would be really appreciated.

Most of the story is supposed to be a mystery. You can try to work out what happened within the shambles of notes and stuff littered throughout the book when its complete.... If I ever decide to share more, cause I'm really nervous