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Fluffball! :3
Fluffball! :3
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Feline (Other)
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File Size 340 kB
Tis a fluffeh!
Great looking stuff kad, but if I might critique a little?
One: Her breasts look a little... smallish, I think. And the proportions on them look a little off.
Two: If I could suggest a better hand position, I'd say to have her be grabbing her right wrist with her left hand. Still just as cute and effective, plus it would look a little more boss, less amateur. ... Not that you're really an amateur O.o
Three: I love her eyes, they make the piece for me, but again the proportions are a little wonky, I'd narrow her left (pic's right) eye slightly, down to even with the rest of her face.
... I can't stretch the critique any further, you're doing a hell of a job on this iron artist thing. Keep it up! :D
Great looking stuff kad, but if I might critique a little?
One: Her breasts look a little... smallish, I think. And the proportions on them look a little off.
Two: If I could suggest a better hand position, I'd say to have her be grabbing her right wrist with her left hand. Still just as cute and effective, plus it would look a little more boss, less amateur. ... Not that you're really an amateur O.o
Three: I love her eyes, they make the piece for me, but again the proportions are a little wonky, I'd narrow her left (pic's right) eye slightly, down to even with the rest of her face.
... I can't stretch the critique any further, you're doing a hell of a job on this iron artist thing. Keep it up! :D
This is a fair cop, to be sure.
But I think many of your fans will agree with me when I say that THIS piece, this subject anyway, deserves a bit more attention from you then this project warranted.
And because a finished version of this piece would just be fan-freaking-tastic come the New Year :3
Good luck, and happy holidays <3
But I think many of your fans will agree with me when I say that THIS piece, this subject anyway, deserves a bit more attention from you then this project warranted.
And because a finished version of this piece would just be fan-freaking-tastic come the New Year :3
Good luck, and happy holidays <3
I thank you for being concerned over how my character was handled; but in the end, I find Kadath did a fine job on illustrating my character. :)
Besides, it's my own fault for not being a little more detailed when it came to describing her bust (as it is ample - heh). But, she does have her wide hips, so I'm happy. :)
Besides, it's my own fault for not being a little more detailed when it came to describing her bust (as it is ample - heh). But, she does have her wide hips, so I'm happy. :)
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