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Proposed illustration that didn't work.
Here's another piece of artwork by 
toledofur.
I really like the composition in this, but, unfortunately, it depicts a scene from a chapter that takes place in Dipper's bedroom. Being in the bedroom, a love seat simply didn't work.
Plus, since the scene starts with Stargazer talking to Dipper, how does Star end up behind the love seat?
So, I had him redraw it. The result of that can be seen here
Word to the wise, artists: check with the patron before finishing work. Make sure you've done it right. It will save you extra work in the long run.
BTW, I have toledofur's permission to post this.
toledofur.I really like the composition in this, but, unfortunately, it depicts a scene from a chapter that takes place in Dipper's bedroom. Being in the bedroom, a love seat simply didn't work.
Plus, since the scene starts with Stargazer talking to Dipper, how does Star end up behind the love seat?
So, I had him redraw it. The result of that can be seen here
Word to the wise, artists: check with the patron before finishing work. Make sure you've done it right. It will save you extra work in the long run.
BTW, I have
toledofur's permission to post this.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 121.7 kB
Dipper: So why don't you think this will work Bobby?
Bobby: I don't know Dipper? Actually I do know but I don't want to hurt anybody's feelings?
Stargazer: It's quite all right Bobby. We know that you don't want to intentionally hurt anybody.
Dipper: Yeah Uncle Star is right Bobby. Just tell us why don't you think this will work?
Bobby: You're sure no one will get mad?
Dipper: Of course they won't. Please tell us Bobby?
Bobby: 'sigh' Well....This couch is a bit much don't you think? I thought the scene was supposed to take place inside your bedroom?
Dipper: Don't be silly, of course we're in...Oh?!
Birch (via speaker): Yeah sorry guys. We're going to have to do the scene all over again. This time in the correct room.
Bobby: I don't know Dipper? Actually I do know but I don't want to hurt anybody's feelings?
Stargazer: It's quite all right Bobby. We know that you don't want to intentionally hurt anybody.
Dipper: Yeah Uncle Star is right Bobby. Just tell us why don't you think this will work?
Bobby: You're sure no one will get mad?
Dipper: Of course they won't. Please tell us Bobby?
Bobby: 'sigh' Well....This couch is a bit much don't you think? I thought the scene was supposed to take place inside your bedroom?
Dipper: Don't be silly, of course we're in...Oh?!
Birch (via speaker): Yeah sorry guys. We're going to have to do the scene all over again. This time in the correct room.
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