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Tooie: This is a story I threw together in about 1 week. It is a cute story about a boy who did not like his own mother, so he basically replaces her with someone else. Simple premise, but I think it works pretty well.
This is more or less a kid's story, and I apologize if that is not your cup of tea. I know I put out a lot of adult stuff on this site, but I do have an appreciation for the cute and cuddling things in life. Please read it and let me know what you think. :)
This is more or less a kid's story, and I apologize if that is not your cup of tea. I know I put out a lot of adult stuff on this site, but I do have an appreciation for the cute and cuddling things in life. Please read it and let me know what you think. :)
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Mouse
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 86 kB
very interesting i like how the kangroo mother was to over protective .and that eating the wrong cereal can poison lil children ..i myself prefer Rice checks hehe..but in alll i like how he goes through all these mom just to get what he wanted in the first place an the Fact that SugarFangs is a SugarPimp hehe..i liked it an i dont read stories often but i think i will now oh yeah Tooie is Cute^.^
This was an awesome story Tooie! Honestly I even think you could make a career out of children's stories if they were all this fun and unique. I particularly liked the character of Sugarfangs. Not really a 'bad guy' so much as an antagonist for the mouse to learn his lessons. At the end I couldn't help but think that this was the plan all along.
But then I did get a slight 'jerk alarm' going off in the scenes where he takes those other mommy's away and trades them for candy. =3 and by the way I agree with his tastes in candy! Jawbreakers WOO!
All in all another excellent, cute and fun story from the roo goddess!
But then I did get a slight 'jerk alarm' going off in the scenes where he takes those other mommy's away and trades them for candy. =3 and by the way I agree with his tastes in candy! Jawbreakers WOO!
All in all another excellent, cute and fun story from the roo goddess!
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