~*( As Isaac finished his letter, the fog of the morning rested heavy upon the village of cookie-cutter houses. This foreign land was not where he’d envisioned himself this year, but the events of the year past had been asking for it. Bits of moisture clung to his forehead as he leaned out the window and breathed the air of what was “the enemy’s” homeland. He pondered if anyone who’d left that small town with his generation had remembered his name.
Desert and death lay beyond the high wall that encircled the camp. Isaac could just make out the curving enigma of sand dunes over the sandstone barrier if he leaned his body upward. That one small glimpse was enough to make him feel insignificant and solitary in the same measure. As far as Isaac could discern, being here was the closest thing to being forgotten.)*~
--- This was inspired by my my two best friends back home. ---
Desert and death lay beyond the high wall that encircled the camp. Isaac could just make out the curving enigma of sand dunes over the sandstone barrier if he leaned his body upward. That one small glimpse was enough to make him feel insignificant and solitary in the same measure. As far as Isaac could discern, being here was the closest thing to being forgotten.)*~
--- This was inspired by my my two best friends back home. ---
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This is without question one of the absolute finest pieces of writing I've ever read. The sheer amount of emotion fit within this work is astonishing. Your imagery is sharp, your metaphors crisp, and, most of all, the story is so very moving. I can't pretend to know how you feel; I've always been home for Christmas. I hope that you will be home again soon to share time with your loved ones, and I wish you safety my friend. Merry Christmas, and through your poetry, I certainly won't forget you.
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