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Hacker's slice of life: Early bird 2/3
Meanwhile, Gaomon is helping Thief getting in shape. Thief is not an early bird as well. At least he more cooperative than Hacker.
Also I'm sorry about the grammar. I seem to be rusty at it T_T
Special thanks to
robrobl for helping me tweak the grammar.
Also I'm sorry about the grammar. I seem to be rusty at it T_T
Special thanks to
robrobl for helping me tweak the grammar.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Digimon
Species Digimon
Size 1450 x 2000px
File Size 703.4 kB
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I appriciate the offer. I hope my grammar is'nt too bad! ^_^
Thanks for the compliments. I've gotten quite good at doing expressions lately and mixing the right amount of anatomical realisim to the digimon's body is quite a challenge. I'm glad it turned out good.
Thanks for the compliments. I've gotten quite good at doing expressions lately and mixing the right amount of anatomical realisim to the digimon's body is quite a challenge. I'm glad it turned out good.
Well, it's mostly minor stuff and overall I'd say your grammar is fine, but here's the things I've noticed:
1. It looks like you missed a word at "...why I need to [be/get] up early?"
2. There should be a comma at "...good for your body[,] Thief." otherwise it reads like "...good for the thief of your body."
3. You use 'coffee' in an uncountable way, so I think it should be either "...want some?" or "...want a cup?"
4. "I think nothing..." sound a bit strange to me, if you ask me "I don't think anything..." sounds better.
1. It looks like you missed a word at "...why I need to [be/get] up early?"
2. There should be a comma at "...good for your body[,] Thief." otherwise it reads like "...good for the thief of your body."
3. You use 'coffee' in an uncountable way, so I think it should be either "...want some?" or "...want a cup?"
4. "I think nothing..." sound a bit strange to me, if you ask me "I don't think anything..." sounds better.
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