
a design for a t-shirt
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 903 x 1280px
File Size 129.8 kB
Nice! I like the intense glare from the eagle :)
A pointer to his arms (I like the buff look, fits well!) The arms go straight down, which makes the crossection of the arms where they overlap across his chest look weak. The eagle's forearms are also a little long, which emphasizes the skinny wrists. Here's a good example how to flesh out your character without loosing the proportion: http://www.stockphotopro.com/photo-.....e_we073843.jpg the arms only crossed without objects in his hands, but it's closs enough to show how the muscles stay in contact with the chest the entire time because the thick muscle are flexed. If it was a more lanky character, the spaces between the chest/arms would be more prominent.
You're very good at spacing the uppershoulders in complimentary to the head, which can be a big difficulty for some.
The wings look a little scraggly for the solidity of the eagle's torso. Eagle wings are very wide and thick with lots of plumage: http://www.baldeagleinfo.com/eagle/.....aglecard-1.jpg
Here's a good example for those upward-swooped wings: http://www.mytaxidermy.com/jpgs/gal.....ds/eagle02.jpg
You've got the grasp of how the tipmost feathers spread slightly, which is good to keep in mind for realistic effect. Like I said before, refference is always a good help ;)
The badge is a little lopsided, but a ruler can straighten those edges easily, no problem.
Overall, a very nice starting design! I hope my tips helped :)
A pointer to his arms (I like the buff look, fits well!) The arms go straight down, which makes the crossection of the arms where they overlap across his chest look weak. The eagle's forearms are also a little long, which emphasizes the skinny wrists. Here's a good example how to flesh out your character without loosing the proportion: http://www.stockphotopro.com/photo-.....e_we073843.jpg the arms only crossed without objects in his hands, but it's closs enough to show how the muscles stay in contact with the chest the entire time because the thick muscle are flexed. If it was a more lanky character, the spaces between the chest/arms would be more prominent.
You're very good at spacing the uppershoulders in complimentary to the head, which can be a big difficulty for some.
The wings look a little scraggly for the solidity of the eagle's torso. Eagle wings are very wide and thick with lots of plumage: http://www.baldeagleinfo.com/eagle/.....aglecard-1.jpg
Here's a good example for those upward-swooped wings: http://www.mytaxidermy.com/jpgs/gal.....ds/eagle02.jpg
You've got the grasp of how the tipmost feathers spread slightly, which is good to keep in mind for realistic effect. Like I said before, refference is always a good help ;)
The badge is a little lopsided, but a ruler can straighten those edges easily, no problem.
Overall, a very nice starting design! I hope my tips helped :)
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