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The following is a belated-as-fuck birthday gift for 
cheshirecatmaster, one of four fucking b-day stories I still gotta write up.
Anyway, here, CCM's OC, the voraciously awesome forest Guardian, Bewaker, has himself a poacher problem, and solves it the best way he knows how.
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RchlisNomSome
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BLOATING, BURPING, PRED TEASING, WEIGHT GAIN, VORE (IMPLIED FATAL).
Enjoy, homies!
cheshirecatmaster, one of four fucking b-day stories I still gotta write up. Anyway, here, CCM's OC, the voraciously awesome forest Guardian, Bewaker, has himself a poacher problem, and solves it the best way he knows how.
Thumbnail image by
RchlisNomSomeCONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BLOATING, BURPING, PRED TEASING, WEIGHT GAIN, VORE (IMPLIED FATAL).
Enjoy, homies!
Category Story / Vore
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 103px
File Size 168 kB
This was so very, very, very worth the wait.
The way you write Big B. is very, very good...I actually think he might be a little MEANER than the way I write him, myself. And considering how "mean" my stuff tends to be, that's probably saying something. The big guy isn't evil, but he IS ruthless when it comes to those who mess with his forest, and considering he's an over-a-century-old guardian of the woods, he doesn't act AT ALL the way you'd expect. I loved how immature and casual you made him, because...well...that's exactly what he SHOULD be. And I appreciate all the belching and mentions of Big B.'s bad breath...you know how to play me like a fiddle.
I also like how Bewaker used more or less the same "pre-noms line" for both poachers, like he rehearses these lines before each meal. I kind of want to incorporate that into my work now. LOL
Not much else to say, I'm sorry to admit; I wish I had more to add after all this time, but I literally can't think of anything beyond how much I freaking ADORE this! If I have one critique to give, it's that the story seems to end rather abruptly. We don't really know what happens to Adam, it just kind of stops at his punchline...but my guess is this little tale was giving you enough headaches, and the overall product makes up for any minor nitpicks there.
Thank you so so so so so so much!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
The way you write Big B. is very, very good...I actually think he might be a little MEANER than the way I write him, myself. And considering how "mean" my stuff tends to be, that's probably saying something. The big guy isn't evil, but he IS ruthless when it comes to those who mess with his forest, and considering he's an over-a-century-old guardian of the woods, he doesn't act AT ALL the way you'd expect. I loved how immature and casual you made him, because...well...that's exactly what he SHOULD be. And I appreciate all the belching and mentions of Big B.'s bad breath...you know how to play me like a fiddle.
I also like how Bewaker used more or less the same "pre-noms line" for both poachers, like he rehearses these lines before each meal. I kind of want to incorporate that into my work now. LOL
Not much else to say, I'm sorry to admit; I wish I had more to add after all this time, but I literally can't think of anything beyond how much I freaking ADORE this! If I have one critique to give, it's that the story seems to end rather abruptly. We don't really know what happens to Adam, it just kind of stops at his punchline...but my guess is this little tale was giving you enough headaches, and the overall product makes up for any minor nitpicks there.
Thank you so so so so so so much!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Thanks, homie. Glad you liked it.
I remember you liked mean preds and didn't want it to seem too excessive with Bewaker, hence his admitting to not being too intolerant of Adam. The rest, well, you know how we do.
The ending, I admit was tricky. I didn't want it to end on a mushy note since I know that isn't your bag with this particular character, so I aimed more at the comedic side. But I'm glad its abruptness didn't sour the whole too much.
I remember you liked mean preds and didn't want it to seem too excessive with Bewaker, hence his admitting to not being too intolerant of Adam. The rest, well, you know how we do.
The ending, I admit was tricky. I didn't want it to end on a mushy note since I know that isn't your bag with this particular character, so I aimed more at the comedic side. But I'm glad its abruptness didn't sour the whole too much.
I don't really mind mush and Bewaker is intended to be the "nicest" of my characters. He's not evil the way the rest of them are, just very...um...ruthless. At times. So you could have gone a bit softer and it would have worked all right. But I'm glad you tried to appeal to me on both those fronts, while still being sensitive to things, and I think the result was a very unique and fun take on Big B. So, end of the day, I approve most highly.
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
This was a lovely read! Bewaker may be one of my favorite characters of cheshire_cat_master and your portrayal is so good, he's so crass I love it.
cheshire_cat_master and your portrayal is so good, he's so crass I love it. 
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