The following is the first of a three-part commission for
RchlisNomSome which consists of three different short stories. First I've done like this, and I ain't complaining.
This short story features her OC's, the lovable ogre, Ganchua and the playful lil imp, Puck, the latter of which is struggling to keep warm in a bit of an aggressive snowstorm. So, he comes up with an idea to keep warm, using his big chubby buddies help.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY CUDDLES, BELLY RUBS, FLUFF, SAFE VORE
Enjoy, homies!
RchlisNomSome which consists of three different short stories. First I've done like this, and I ain't complaining. This short story features her OC's, the lovable ogre, Ganchua and the playful lil imp, Puck, the latter of which is struggling to keep warm in a bit of an aggressive snowstorm. So, he comes up with an idea to keep warm, using his big chubby buddies help.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY CUDDLES, BELLY RUBS, FLUFF, SAFE VORE
Enjoy, homies!
Category Story / Vore
Species Orc
Size 96 x 120px
File Size 63.3 kB
Oh dear Jesus, it’s downright criminal how adorable this is.
I’m super satisfied with how the shorter format worked here, it came out exactly the way I wanted! Short, simple, and doesn’t overstay it’s welcome while still managing the perfect amount of detail. And as always, you simply nailed the characterization of these precious dorks. ^^
Thank you so much, and I can’t wait to read the other two parts!
I’m super satisfied with how the shorter format worked here, it came out exactly the way I wanted! Short, simple, and doesn’t overstay it’s welcome while still managing the perfect amount of detail. And as always, you simply nailed the characterization of these precious dorks. ^^
Thank you so much, and I can’t wait to read the other two parts!
Thanks, fam. I'm happy that you're pleased with the final result.
This was different but it made writing everything a lot easier in this format since I was able to juggle multiple stories at once for the same commission. And since each one was shorter, it was a lot easier to run with. It helps that all the prompts for this were aces all the way.
Of course, these two bois in particular are tons of fun to write for in general, and were some of the first of your OC's I had the pleasure to write a commission for. So I'm happy they're still fun and cute together here.
This was different but it made writing everything a lot easier in this format since I was able to juggle multiple stories at once for the same commission. And since each one was shorter, it was a lot easier to run with. It helps that all the prompts for this were aces all the way.
Of course, these two bois in particular are tons of fun to write for in general, and were some of the first of your OC's I had the pleasure to write a commission for. So I'm happy they're still fun and cute together here.
I’ll have to keep that in mind for any future commissions and trades we do. ;)
They sure are. ^^ Especially with how cautious Ganchua is while lil’ Puck helps put his mind at ease. It’s really cute to see the big boi looking a little less anxious after their first meeting, and actually basking in the feeling of keeping his buddy safe within him...even if he has the urge to constantly check up on him. XP
They sure are. ^^ Especially with how cautious Ganchua is while lil’ Puck helps put his mind at ease. It’s really cute to see the big boi looking a little less anxious after their first meeting, and actually basking in the feeling of keeping his buddy safe within him...even if he has the urge to constantly check up on him. XP
I’d be all for that approach, homie.
He’s my favorite kinda reluctant pred. He’s already had his big anxious break the first time around, but now that he’s comfortable, he can grow to appreciate that his smol loaf feels nice and safe within him.
Plus the idea of him being a neurotic mess who still checks on his prey every six seconds is just precious.
He’s my favorite kinda reluctant pred. He’s already had his big anxious break the first time around, but now that he’s comfortable, he can grow to appreciate that his smol loaf feels nice and safe within him.
Plus the idea of him being a neurotic mess who still checks on his prey every six seconds is just precious.
He has to admit, while he doesn’t like the thought of eating other creatures, the feeling of fullness is quite nice. :P
Agreed. I can just see him after a while, sheepishly tapping his claws together as he’s trying to decide whether to check up on Puck again, or leave him be so he doesn’t wake him up. ^^
Also, I love that little moment when Puck is kneading Ganchua’s doughy belly like a cat would. That is so adorable I can’t even put it into words.
Agreed. I can just see him after a while, sheepishly tapping his claws together as he’s trying to decide whether to check up on Puck again, or leave him be so he doesn’t wake him up. ^^
Also, I love that little moment when Puck is kneading Ganchua’s doughy belly like a cat would. That is so adorable I can’t even put it into words.
Especially when that fullness comes with a smol impy loaf that vibrates pleasantly when he's content. Cue Ganchy's belly just naturally jostling from Puck if he's really content.
That's so precious.
I can see Ganchy eventually just leaning down, trying to listen to his belly, only to leave it be when he feels that familiar rumbling again to answer his question for him.
Glad you liked that moment, fam. Papa bear ogre boi's got one of the most cushion-y bellies out there. It was too good not to have smol imp loaf kneading and sinking into it like a kitty loaf.
That's so precious.
I can see Ganchy eventually just leaning down, trying to listen to his belly, only to leave it be when he feels that familiar rumbling again to answer his question for him.
Glad you liked that moment, fam. Papa bear ogre boi's got one of the most cushion-y bellies out there. It was too good not to have smol imp loaf kneading and sinking into it like a kitty loaf.
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