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The following is the second of a three-part commission for 
RchlisNomSome which consists of three different short stories. First I've done like this, and I ain't complaining.
This one's a full-fledged story, features her OC, the lovable eating machine, Megabyte. Here, Megabyte, left home alone by his human companion on an empty stomach, decides to satisfy his hunger by stealing about a dozen pizzas from a delivery drone.
Let this be a cautionary tale against automation in the service industry, homies.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING, HICCUPS, INDIGESTION, STOMACH GURGLING, STUFFING, THROAT PLAY
Original icon artwork available here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24948969/
Enjoy, homies!
RchlisNomSome which consists of three different short stories. First I've done like this, and I ain't complaining. This one's a full-fledged story, features her OC, the lovable eating machine, Megabyte. Here, Megabyte, left home alone by his human companion on an empty stomach, decides to satisfy his hunger by stealing about a dozen pizzas from a delivery drone.
Let this be a cautionary tale against automation in the service industry, homies.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING, HICCUPS, INDIGESTION, STOMACH GURGLING, STUFFING, THROAT PLAY
Original icon artwork available here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24948969/
Enjoy, homies!
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Alien (Other)
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 106.8 kB
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Yet another gem of a story. I had this idea in mind for a while now and suggested it a couple times, but I think it works perfectly as a shorter length story (even if it’s a lot longer than the other two, not that I’m complaining in the slightest. XD)
You have an excellent grasp on Megabyte’s mannerisms and speech patterns, but I think my favorite part of this story was the big bot’s interactions with his own sentient tail. The way he scolds Mini like a child and acts all shocked when it acts out is so silly and downright hilarious. XP
Of course, the belly stuff is fan-phucking-tastic as always, with Megs growing progressively bigger and more worn down as time passes. Three thumbs up to you on that. 👍👍👍
You have an excellent grasp on Megabyte’s mannerisms and speech patterns, but I think my favorite part of this story was the big bot’s interactions with his own sentient tail. The way he scolds Mini like a child and acts all shocked when it acts out is so silly and downright hilarious. XP
Of course, the belly stuff is fan-phucking-tastic as always, with Megs growing progressively bigger and more worn down as time passes. Three thumbs up to you on that. 👍👍👍
I'm really glad I was able to do your bot-boi justice and that you had so much fun with this one.
Your notes on the bot-boi as well as your other doodles were helpful. But the biggest thanks goes to
CheshireCatMaster for the story he wrote up for you. It gave me a lot of a really good sense of how Megs behaves and talks. And the fact that his tail is such a troublemaker was too perfect not to include after reading his story.
The belly stuff was actually a big part of why this one turned out longer. It was too much fun not to extend, having him getting fuller and fuller as time went on. Plus, it gave me room to add some of the stuff I know you's a fan of.
Your notes on the bot-boi as well as your other doodles were helpful. But the biggest thanks goes to
CheshireCatMaster for the story he wrote up for you. It gave me a lot of a really good sense of how Megs behaves and talks. And the fact that his tail is such a troublemaker was too perfect not to include after reading his story. The belly stuff was actually a big part of why this one turned out longer. It was too much fun not to extend, having him getting fuller and fuller as time went on. Plus, it gave me room to add some of the stuff I know you's a fan of.
Oh yeah, you have him to thank for the “Mini-byte” idea in the first place. XD My original idea still had Megs’ tail as a semi-sentient being, but it didn’t have an actual personality of it’s own. Kinda like how octopuses have “brains” in their tentacles, but they still follow the command of the creature. CCM’s interpretation is definitely a lot more amusing.
I’m glad you enjoyed writing the big bot getting bigger and bigger. I certainly did. XP
I’m glad you enjoyed writing the big bot getting bigger and bigger. I certainly did. XP
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