something i wrote today
Category Poetry / All
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"Crying when alone so no one knows my tears will never be
heared as a lay in this bed of dead flowers of love "
Ok first off... Heared?
It's HEARD...
as a lay?
Wha?
"I don't know what wrong "
I'll tell you what's wrong. You need to learn grammar... you need to not write this horrible awful junk. Seriously...
heared as a lay in this bed of dead flowers of love "
Ok first off... Heared?
It's HEARD...
as a lay?
Wha?
"I don't know what wrong "
I'll tell you what's wrong. You need to learn grammar... you need to not write this horrible awful junk. Seriously...
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