My adorable little sis with a slight update to her model :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 720px
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Very much. Something about it makes her look a bit older than other pics with the black bandana/band in her hair, but not quite as old as in http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23636511/ or http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20196738/
Think I still like http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20196738/ better, but this is version is now #2.
Got to be honest: something about her eyes is off putting to me. Like it looks like they're a lot higher then they should been?
Wait! No! I figured it out. (I'm comparing to this picture by the way. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29908613/) It's her mouth and chin that's throwing me. They look, for lack of a better term here, older then the rest of her face.
And there's nothing wrong with older itself: but I don't think you've updated her eyes and mascara enough to keep up with the other changes. Just try this for a moment (hopefully I don't sound entitled or bossy right now ) But try covering the top and bottom part of her face and looking at them separately. Cover everything under her nose it doesn't look like she's changed at all: cover up her eyes and she looks like a much older woman. At least that's what I'm seeing.
Sorry that I'm ragging on these updates so much Tiff. Believe it or not I'm not actually try to sound obnoxious.
Wait! No! I figured it out. (I'm comparing to this picture by the way. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29908613/) It's her mouth and chin that's throwing me. They look, for lack of a better term here, older then the rest of her face.
And there's nothing wrong with older itself: but I don't think you've updated her eyes and mascara enough to keep up with the other changes. Just try this for a moment (hopefully I don't sound entitled or bossy right now ) But try covering the top and bottom part of her face and looking at them separately. Cover everything under her nose it doesn't look like she's changed at all: cover up her eyes and she looks like a much older woman. At least that's what I'm seeing.
Sorry that I'm ragging on these updates so much Tiff. Believe it or not I'm not actually try to sound obnoxious.
Hmm, you can definitely do that, but I think you'd still need to change the eyes a little bit.
Or maybe not! Maybe it's just this one picture that looks off to me. I'll wait for a second one to come though and give another opinion then.
Again: I hate to rag on your new pics like this. I'm not being too harsh am I?
Or maybe not! Maybe it's just this one picture that looks off to me. I'll wait for a second one to come though and give another opinion then.
Again: I hate to rag on your new pics like this. I'm not being too harsh am I?
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