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Just a story I wrote for English 101 last semester...
I hope its not too awful :\
Story and all elements © me
I hope its not too awful :\
Story and all elements © me
Category Story / All
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File Size 44.6 kB
The ending seemed a little rushed but overall it was pretty good. The diction in the first half had this prim, formal feel to it, with a hell of a lot of adjectives crammed into so few lines (which kind of worked), while the second half quickly switched to a more laid-back, colloquial feel.
I wouldn't mind seeing where you could take this (ie: MOAR).
I wouldn't mind seeing where you could take this (ie: MOAR).
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