i enjoyed chapter two very much. iits rough but i can read it just fine as i use to write like this. with practice comes skill. i first started on here and my writing wasnt that great but ive brought it up to a level that im very proud of. this story is very good.

ill definntly try to pick up the 4th chapter wat happenned was i had written the 4th chapter and it was 3 times longer than the previuos ones nad after i finished it i put in on a floppy disc(at the time it was wat everyone used) but after the printed copy got torn to shreds and my disc cracked in half i just couldnt bring myself to write the whole chapter again and thats when i stopped writing it.

my story Dragoon use to reside on a USB drive only and it got torched while i was welding. i was devastated. i didnt think i would ever redo it again. but i picked it up again and now i have 23 chapters that range from 2 pages at the least to 14 at the most. im glad you redid it because its a great story.

thats why now i have a 1 terrabyte external hardrive that i literally keep copies of everything iwrite on and in turn i opy all that stuff onto my others mac in case the external one dies. so USB, my computer, external hardrive, and mothers computer i think thats the best one can do for keeping data safe XP

i know hav 5 usb sticks and copies of my works on cd