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Meh, been doing a few pages time by time, seems that Dark Spyro is telling Spyro about some things to come or might come, .. scary right?... Spyro dosen't believe that, he knows Nina wouldn't do anything bad or terrible... :< ... hrmm....
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Meh, been doing a few pages time by time, seems that Dark Spyro is telling Spyro about some things to come or might come, .. scary right?... Spyro dosen't believe that, he knows Nina wouldn't do anything bad or terrible... :< ... hrmm....
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spyro,ds Sierra
Done in Photoshop Elements 2.0 & SAI
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Arg! I can't take it anymore! Please, please change the font of the evil/dark characters to something that is readable! I don't know how many plot points I've missed because I have no idea what Dark Spyro/Dark Zonoya/whoever is saying. As a comic writer, your work suffers when your readers have a hard time just reading the text or, worse yet, when they can't read it at all.
Yeah, it is. The general rule of thumb with comics is to use the same font on everything and black text in white word balloons. If a comic is hard to read, you will loose readers just for that reason. If you really want to differentiate between evil and good characters, use a regular font that's easy to read but make it white and put it in a black word balloon (like Morpheus in Sandman :D).
I honestly can't tell. :/ The font itself is what's hard to read. It's a bad font, honestly. It's the sort of font that is okay for a badge or a big fancy sign, but it does murder to the eyes when one has to read a lot of it. This comic artist sums it all up better than I can: http://evilengine9.deviantart.com/j.....rnal/29469586/
I agree with most things said in this, except that I find the text legible, blurry a little, but legible...
If this is a dream, then Dark Spyro would be only the embodiment of Spyro's concerns, and even then, when you think about it, are they really lies? Are they really just impossible occurrences? I don't think so, I think that if the cards are played wrongly or however they turn out to be, Nina (Williams) may almost certainly be lost if that's what's to lose. There is truth in things, even that.
When it comes to Malefor and Frigir, you really wonder if they're that evil at all, or at least if they were that evil to begin with. Because, mostly in Frigir's case, if he does turn evil, will it be because he was always meant to be evil? Or will it be because he was rejected by something that he so warmly wanted to embrace? If Frigir turns evil, it won't be for his loyalty to his dad or because of destiny, no, I think it'll be because of an aroused hatred of Spyro, especially due to his irrational attack earlier on... But still... There's hope in other things... Spyro's fears, perhaps...
Maybe Malefor was a weaker subject to such loathing???
If this is a dream, then Dark Spyro would be only the embodiment of Spyro's concerns, and even then, when you think about it, are they really lies? Are they really just impossible occurrences? I don't think so, I think that if the cards are played wrongly or however they turn out to be, Nina (Williams) may almost certainly be lost if that's what's to lose. There is truth in things, even that.
When it comes to Malefor and Frigir, you really wonder if they're that evil at all, or at least if they were that evil to begin with. Because, mostly in Frigir's case, if he does turn evil, will it be because he was always meant to be evil? Or will it be because he was rejected by something that he so warmly wanted to embrace? If Frigir turns evil, it won't be for his loyalty to his dad or because of destiny, no, I think it'll be because of an aroused hatred of Spyro, especially due to his irrational attack earlier on... But still... There's hope in other things... Spyro's fears, perhaps...
Maybe Malefor was a weaker subject to such loathing???
I have 4 things:
1. awesome work
2. poor spyro. he cant do anything to shut DS up. However, I kinda agree with DS except about Frijir becoming evil. I may be wrong but Frijir and Nina would never become evil.
3. Holy Shit!! It's Dark Spyro!!
4 *kicks Dark spyro....... Road House!!!!!!!
1. awesome work
2. poor spyro. he cant do anything to shut DS up. However, I kinda agree with DS except about Frijir becoming evil. I may be wrong but Frijir and Nina would never become evil.
3. Holy Shit!! It's Dark Spyro!!
4 *kicks Dark spyro....... Road House!!!!!!!
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