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Alternate title: "Fountain of Whims"
More AR, this one's a bit longer, isn't it? It starts sort of suddenly too, not sure what I was planning to precede this with... This character actually has a NAME, doesn't he? Not especially common in my writing is that?
The literature and text submission process is sort of confusing to me. I notice plenty of writers simply submit .doc versions of their stories for readers to download and view. I don't know whether I should go this route or not, what do you guys prefer? The plain text .txt files are the only ones that show up in the submission page as far as I know. For some reason, several characters, apostrophe's most prominent, seem to be causing errors in the document... And I'd really like to have formatting such as italic text and indents, page breaks and stuff... I dunno.
But anyway, enjoy the story if you are so inclined. And I apologize if I inflict any offense to the muscle-fur fans... Just throwing that out there. Sorry...
EDIT: Changed it to a .doc file. Just click download please, its so much easier to read that way anyway.
EDIT: Yeah, changed it back- With some minor html adjustments. Just a test, trying to figure out the text submission engine- thingy...
More AR, this one's a bit longer, isn't it? It starts sort of suddenly too, not sure what I was planning to precede this with... This character actually has a NAME, doesn't he? Not especially common in my writing is that?
The literature and text submission process is sort of confusing to me. I notice plenty of writers simply submit .doc versions of their stories for readers to download and view. I don't know whether I should go this route or not, what do you guys prefer? The plain text .txt files are the only ones that show up in the submission page as far as I know. For some reason, several characters, apostrophe's most prominent, seem to be causing errors in the document... And I'd really like to have formatting such as italic text and indents, page breaks and stuff... I dunno.
But anyway, enjoy the story if you are so inclined. And I apologize if I inflict any offense to the muscle-fur fans... Just throwing that out there. Sorry...
EDIT: Changed it to a .doc file. Just click download please, its so much easier to read that way anyway.
EDIT: Yeah, changed it back- With some minor html adjustments. Just a test, trying to figure out the text submission engine- thingy...
Category Story / Transformation
Species Turtle / Tortoise
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 19.8 kB
Hmmmm...I sort of felt bad for Teddy, but I can see he got caught up with power, let it go to his head, and see it turn for the worse for him...although I now have this adorable mental image of an infant koopa wrapped in a sock...which goes to show how you did, good work! (And I must admit, and don't take this the wrong way, but I definitely enjoyed the bits with comparisons to the shoes and socks during all parts of the overall transformation...don't get that very often in these stories, and it was impressive how much detail you went into it. Good Job!).
Not even sure if the user is still around, but I will comment on this.
I have to say that was an amazing out going story from being your old regular self, to some awesome large muscle Koopa, and then to being a tiny infant Koopa. I do feel bad for Teddy that right at the beginning of the story he was all bruised and beaten up in search for something to heal his wounds seeking to become stronger. I must say I loved your details and even some words people normally don't add into a story. ( Going to have to re-read back and get a few words looked up. )
I loved the end point of your story where the infant Koopa wrapped himself with the sock looking out on this desert sand towards his gear which was a floating on the water. To me, it give this image of an empty shell floating across this large water with a sun beaming down from the sky onto the wet shell. You did an amazing job, and to any Koopa I would read this a bunch of times to how sweet it was.
I have to say that was an amazing out going story from being your old regular self, to some awesome large muscle Koopa, and then to being a tiny infant Koopa. I do feel bad for Teddy that right at the beginning of the story he was all bruised and beaten up in search for something to heal his wounds seeking to become stronger. I must say I loved your details and even some words people normally don't add into a story. ( Going to have to re-read back and get a few words looked up. )
I loved the end point of your story where the infant Koopa wrapped himself with the sock looking out on this desert sand towards his gear which was a floating on the water. To me, it give this image of an empty shell floating across this large water with a sun beaming down from the sky onto the wet shell. You did an amazing job, and to any Koopa I would read this a bunch of times to how sweet it was.
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