It might just be my computer, but I can't get it to download to read it. >.=.<

notification of fixation! o.=.0

Oh no! I can't download it too. >.=.<

notification of fixation! o.=.0

Yay, I can see it! ^.=.^
Boy, this story is getting dark and depressing. But nice.

there we go! ^.=.^ fixed :D

gettin better >:B NEED... MORE... VIOLENCE... jk :P

Alright, this is just a sum comment for all 6 chapters, so here goes.

...You poor dragon! That is almost indescribably terrible! And I can speak from experience when it comes to your childhood, that kind of crap used to happen to me all the time as a kid in 'real life' (although I don't think the term 'hellspawn' was ever used), and that was from human to human! I can only imagine how much worse it would have been had racial tension also been a factor ('cause that's essentially what this is. I see no difference between the draconians in your story and the black community of the Jim Crow era).
Truth be told, though, our stuff really has a lot in common:

With yours, an attack on the government turns humans against scalies (and furs, but I don't care so much about them); with mine, a group of powerful mages decides to go genocidal against dragons and try to kill them all.
With yours, one parent abandons you while the other essentially disowns you; with mine, both parents are killed by the aforementioned mages.
With yours, your character turns evil when he get's angry b/c of a curse mark and his scales turn black and he enjoys blood; with mine, he turns evil b/c of a black-dragon's curse and his scales turn black (with a black, heatless flame to boot) and he requires blood to live.
Although, I must admit, the dragons we find to comfort us are radically different; You find a hot white female, and I get stuck with a crusty old golden Great Wyrm who becomes a father figure... now just how in the hell is that fair? :(... I'd rather have the dragoness (although, if you read my 'DC Ch.5 and Eragon' journal, you'll see that I'm working on that problem at top speed ).

I have to say, this was some superb stuff. The grammar's a little much to be desired, but the plot is so dramatic and spell-binding (no pun intended) that the grammatical problems are easily ignored in favor of finding out what the hell happens next. I, personally was completely glued to my computer screen the entire time I was reading this, and some of the stuff there really got my blood up.
Btw, way to pwn those humans , I'm almost afraid to read about the consequences in Ch.7, though. Hey, when's that coming out, anyway? These chapters are far too short to be holding out like this, I mean c'mon, don't keep a dragon in suspense like this! *in a whiney wyrmling voice* I wanna know what happens now! *pouts*

...Oh, by the way, I'm going to have to Fav all of these, so don't freak out about all the messages you'll be getting... then again, if you're reading this, you're probably past the point where a warning would do any good... so nevermind the previous statement.

Peace!

lol...
I don't suffer those things ^.=.^ (IRL)
hehehe
I just look on some of the newscasts and from other friends experiences on how these things happen XD.

I might just continue this in some picture ways while having captions telling the story. I believe it will have a better "eyecatcher"

Huh? Hell no! Your writing kicks ass! (Or maybe I'm just saying that b/c it's so much like my own)

Don't care much about furs, eh? *waps you upside the head* I am a fur, you know, even if it's only by half. *flutters off to read the chapter, muttering about draconic arrogance*

~GR

*rubs the back of his head crossly and stares after her*
1. I didn't know you when I wrote this.
2. You're a dragon, too! You just have bat and vampire DNA mixed into you! It's different!

*laughs* Because the heart beats under a covering of fur, feathers, or skin, it is of no consequence to you?

I'm not really a dragon, I'm some sort of very odd hybrid, not one thing nor the other. If I had been spliced with say, a unicorn, would you think less of me?

~GR

*shudder* Ugh, you just made me think of 'bella sera'. It's a card game based on horses, and it's even gayer than Jack from 'Will and Grace'.
No offence, dear, but I absolutely loathe unicorns.
And furs aren't of no consequence to me. It's just that if it came down to a choice between a metallic dragon and a fur, I'd pick the dragon.

How in the nine hells can you "loathe" a unicorn? They aren't evil. Actually, they're kinda cute!

~GR

*shudders* If I were a chromatic, theirs would be the first species I'd wipe out. They're so disgustingly cute that everybody falls for them in stead of us! Even gryphons aren't as bad as unicorns!

*level stare* You wipe out unicorns, I'll wipe you out. And I've seen some pretty disgustingly cute dragons too, you know.

~GR

Oh, I know! Them I fawn over! It's just that you never see cute little wyrmlings on little girl's backpacks at Wal-Mart, do you? No! It's always those one-horned freaks!

No, actually, I see a lot of Dora the Explorer stuff. I don't see too many unicorns.

~GR

Ugh, well I see them all the time out here. It's sickening.

Wait...I get it, you're pissed because they have bigger horns than you! XD

~GR

And no, they don't have bigger horns than me. I could spear one of the damn beasts on the end of one if I felt like it.

Nicely done! This is shaping up to be a very good series! Keep it up!

~GR