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My second entry in 
poetigress Thursday Prompt, in which you write something inspired by a word or phrase. This time it was the word "Silver".
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Silver, he came to take mine.
Silver, with its awful shine.
Silver, he took it but wanted more.
Silver, I had one left.
Silver, I stabbed him. And saw him roar.
Silver, a tear from his eye as he laid on the ground.
Silver, scattered all around.
Yeah lol, I'm not a poet =P
Written by Bo 21-01-2010
poetigress Thursday Prompt, in which you write something inspired by a word or phrase. This time it was the word "Silver"._____________________________________________
Silver, he came to take mine.
Silver, with its awful shine.
Silver, he took it but wanted more.
Silver, I had one left.
Silver, I stabbed him. And saw him roar.
Silver, a tear from his eye as he laid on the ground.
Silver, scattered all around.
Yeah lol, I'm not a poet =P
Written by Bo 21-01-2010
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 628 B
It's not bad, it is not really my taste in poetry, as I have a preference for more flowing structural poetry.
Like Rainwhisker I can only just see the link to silver, but then my thursday prompt isn't linked closely, and the silver at the begining of each line of a poem about theft is intresting.
Like Rainwhisker I can only just see the link to silver, but then my thursday prompt isn't linked closely, and the silver at the begining of each line of a poem about theft is intresting.
Very nicely done. I rather like how the viewpoint doesn't change, it's constantly on the silverware... this "silver" works as a motive, and as a weapon, and in the end, silver is everywhere. Very nice, even if the trick is simple, it's rather effective.
Quite interesting, although violent, little poem. I enjoyed reading this. These poems of yours remind me of two writers/poets here at FA. The other one writes a lot of poems, the other one writes a lot of stories that involve similar themes as the two poems I have read from you.
Quite interesting, although violent, little poem. I enjoyed reading this. These poems of yours remind me of two writers/poets here at FA. The other one writes a lot of poems, the other one writes a lot of stories that involve similar themes as the two poems I have read from you.
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