This is my first draft of a prologue of a story that I'm writing.

I'm not too certain where most of my inspiration for this came from, but Castlevania does have a small part in a general idea of it all but besides that most of it is, I think original.

Anyway, I'm still a very novice writer and I wonder if anyone's willing to help me out with criticism. This is currently in the scraps, as I want to perfect this a little before I work on the rest of the story, having a clearer idea on what may be wrong with my writing style.

Thanks for any comments~