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So, last night I wrote this sonnet (though I really should have been in bed) in under an hour; that's a new record for me. It's not very flamboyant, like most of my other works, but I believe it gets its point across in a poetically robust manner! :D
Oh, and this poem was inspired by
Anhes' most recent submission --> Picking Flowers for Mom
In truth, I intended for the poem to have a more innocent approach, like that of the child portrayed in Anhes' picture; however, I was feeling sonnet, and I didn't think I could do such an approach justice with that form, so it's a bit more general and straightforward. =3
To the child in Anhes' picture, that flower is probably the BEST gift in the world, and he would give it to his mother with earnest intentions. Just think about that for a bit. ^^
I hope you all enjoy this quickie post! 8D
Until next poem! ;>
Oh, and this poem was inspired by
Anhes' most recent submission --> Picking Flowers for MomIn truth, I intended for the poem to have a more innocent approach, like that of the child portrayed in Anhes' picture; however, I was feeling sonnet, and I didn't think I could do such an approach justice with that form, so it's a bit more general and straightforward. =3
To the child in Anhes' picture, that flower is probably the BEST gift in the world, and he would give it to his mother with earnest intentions. Just think about that for a bit. ^^
I hope you all enjoy this quickie post! 8D
Until next poem! ;>
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I need to think of more original comments to make, haha. How many times can I get away with saying "wonderful, amazing, and perfect" before it gets old? Let's find out!
Another wonderful piece!
One tiny little thing though, that I assume is a typo. "But oh the opposite does too exists" Methinks you need not the "S" at the end of exist! ^_^
Another wonderful piece!
One tiny little thing though, that I assume is a typo. "But oh the opposite does too exists" Methinks you need not the "S" at the end of exist! ^_^
Hmm, you bring up a good notion, as I myself wasn't sure of. x3
Syntactical inversion does indeed make subject/verb agreement a tad bit more difficult, but...I believe it requires the "s" because (opposite) is singular, and the verb should thus have the "s" (according to the rule anyways). =/
Try looking at it this way --> "...the opposite exist(s) too"
I think that's right, right? lol
Syntactical inversion does indeed make subject/verb agreement a tad bit more difficult, but...I believe it requires the "s" because (opposite) is singular, and the verb should thus have the "s" (according to the rule anyways). =/
Try looking at it this way --> "...the opposite exist(s) too"
I think that's right, right? lol
I think that's the first time your arrangement of words has ever thrown me off even slightly. I think it's because the sentence would make perfect grammatical sense to me without the "s."
In any case, I defer to your greater knowledge, and stand by my statement that it's a wonderful poem! ^_^
In any case, I defer to your greater knowledge, and stand by my statement that it's a wonderful poem! ^_^
Well, I think this particular poem was a bit rushed, and I believe the syntactical inversions are lacking too much. =/
'Tis why the poem is now in scraps. ^^;
I will probably write this one over. (o.o)
But ah, in regards to your grammatical comment; you may actually be right about the "s". =O
The key word in the inversion is "does." --> (does exist) ~not "exists"~
The change is indeed necessary, but, like I said, I'm still gonna redo this one (...sometime in the future). lol
Your comment is much appreciate! :3
'Tis why the poem is now in scraps. ^^;
I will probably write this one over. (o.o)
But ah, in regards to your grammatical comment; you may actually be right about the "s". =O
The key word in the inversion is "does." --> (does exist) ~not "exists"~
The change is indeed necessary, but, like I said, I'm still gonna redo this one (...sometime in the future). lol
Your comment is much appreciate! :3
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