
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=un6_8goTxSY
Here is my 2D animated short which I have been working on since just before MFF. Click the link above which will take you to youtube where you may view the short.
Unfortunatly I couldnt post the actual video file here, beacuse FurAffinity only accepts .swf (a type of flash video) files. My animation was not ccreated in flash, and it seems nearly impossible to convert my filetype over to SWF.
Anyway, I would love to hear any feedback you guys have about the story, animation etc.
Here is my 2D animated short which I have been working on since just before MFF. Click the link above which will take you to youtube where you may view the short.
Unfortunatly I couldnt post the actual video file here, beacuse FurAffinity only accepts .swf (a type of flash video) files. My animation was not ccreated in flash, and it seems nearly impossible to convert my filetype over to SWF.
Anyway, I would love to hear any feedback you guys have about the story, animation etc.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 1280 x 960px
File Size 126 kB
Ugh, I should have proof-read my comment on your other post of the animation link. :P What I meant to say is that you already know that I love your animation, and that a lot more people must like it too, because it's already getting honors on YouTube.
http://www.foxforge.com/lj/0612/FlukeHonors.gif
http://www.foxforge.com/lj/0612/FlukeHonors.gif
Awesome piece of work. Was this your first animation project to this complex of a degree? It's good. Manages to tell the story pretty well, and make good use of camera angles.
My only comment on the negative side is in the script. It wasn't all to clear where the assailant came from/what his purpose was and I thought it was odd that he had a pull string weapon on his hand when it looked like it was a cybernetic attachment.
Honestly though it was a great piece and the workmanship shows. You've got waaaay too much talent to not be holding a professional animation/artist positon.
My only comment on the negative side is in the script. It wasn't all to clear where the assailant came from/what his purpose was and I thought it was odd that he had a pull string weapon on his hand when it looked like it was a cybernetic attachment.
Honestly though it was a great piece and the workmanship shows. You've got waaaay too much talent to not be holding a professional animation/artist positon.
Ok Feedback...
THIS CAN'T BE YOUR'S THERE ARE NO HEARTSHAPED PANTS IN THERE!!!
Anyway.... the tauren is sexyyyyy...
Stuff that could be Important:
i like the light shinign behind the tauren/Bull/whatever exactly he is, when he's looking down on him.
I dislike that hes falling down without moving a bit (just like a 90deg. rotated image). Eventually you could move his arms a bit when he falls, like when the body falls first and the arms follow...
I'm not good at critic so thats the only thing i noticed...
I really like it, good work. :)
THIS CAN'T BE YOUR'S THERE ARE NO HEARTSHAPED PANTS IN THERE!!!
Anyway.... the tauren is sexyyyyy...
Stuff that could be Important:
i like the light shinign behind the tauren/Bull/whatever exactly he is, when he's looking down on him.
I dislike that hes falling down without moving a bit (just like a 90deg. rotated image). Eventually you could move his arms a bit when he falls, like when the body falls first and the arms follow...
I'm not good at critic so thats the only thing i noticed...
I really like it, good work. :)
woooow....very nice indeed. I agree with everyone what a cool piece of animation. Im actually training to be an animator myself *2D preferably* this really has inspired me alot...thank you!!! ^_^. Did you do this in flash or was it a real drawn piece of work that was finished in the computer? very nice! hopefully there will be some sort of furry themed cartoon *like this stly* in the near future! :D
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