A story commission for my friend
EGKangaroo
Chase and Dean have been dating for 4 years now. Their society is built around preds eating prey. It's the natural order, but are Chase and Dean the exception?
Characters and story © Me
EGKangarooChase and Dean have been dating for 4 years now. Their society is built around preds eating prey. It's the natural order, but are Chase and Dean the exception?
Characters and story © Me
Category Story / Vore
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 684.3 kB
I just wanna say that your writing is absolutely spot on and the mood you write with is just so damn erotic and sensual. There's so much intimacy between the two in the consummation of their relationship through Dean entering his place in the food chain below his lover. There's so much to love about the way Dean kicks and squirms while Chase revels in the enjoyment of helping his prey become a part of him, assuaging him that this is just how things are supposed to go. Sometimes seeming careless about prey's desire to escape his doom yet still having deeply seated feelings of intimacy and love for him. He wasn't mean or rude or hurtful. He was just a predator, and he was a prey~ a different kind of intimacy, no less romantic than what they had before.
As Chase said that line "this is how our world works" I felt my cheeks just getting so red. An acknowledgement that this was fate, and that maybe in a way Dean knew that it was, and that this was indeed where he belonged. >////<; God, the mooooood~ all that powerlessness of the prey losing himself to his predator only emphasised by the predators seeming unperturbed by their protests and kicks of discomfort, taking pleasure in the act even, enjoying every squirm and kick and muffled plea~ <3<3<3
I am just GUSHING right now lol, but again thank youuuu!!!
As Chase said that line "this is how our world works" I felt my cheeks just getting so red. An acknowledgement that this was fate, and that maybe in a way Dean knew that it was, and that this was indeed where he belonged. >////<; God, the mooooood~ all that powerlessness of the prey losing himself to his predator only emphasised by the predators seeming unperturbed by their protests and kicks of discomfort, taking pleasure in the act even, enjoying every squirm and kick and muffled plea~ <3<3<3
I am just GUSHING right now lol, but again thank youuuu!!!
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