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Official page 1 holy smokes time to goooo

Couple things I'm trying out this chapter: more unique panel arrangements, a little more time spent on details/anatomy (not too much more, but more than last time), and new method of doing my typeface. Did you know it's "correct" to use all caps type in balloons for comics because it increases clarity? I knew this and never did it cause I didn't like how it looked. I still don't really like it but I'm gonna try it for a bit and see. I probably won't fix the "I"s which is another thing comics do but it's a start.

Anyway, Kailani makes an alter and looks cute and Vernil comes to say hello.
Feddy's bedroom changed design again btw ssssh


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• Favorite panel: 5
• Least Favorite panel: 4 (the figure is too big even after I shrunk it and increased her hands oops)

• Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspective errors and size inconsistencies.
-My poorly drawn crystals I tried ok UnU






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