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I told my friend 
furrypeace I'd like to some more gift art for her, and she asked to have her fursona, Mitsuki, lying on her back in lingerie.
I know I've been saying this a lot in my submissions lately, but god, am I surprised at how this came out! I'm soooo proud of myself with the detail and everything and the hair came out amazing and the frills too! X3
furrypeace I'd like to some more gift art for her, and she asked to have her fursona, Mitsuki, lying on her back in lingerie. I know I've been saying this a lot in my submissions lately, but god, am I surprised at how this came out! I'm soooo proud of myself with the detail and everything and the hair came out amazing and the frills too! X3
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Housecat
Size 1000 x 1000px
File Size 567.3 kB
Oh, Wow! That was so fast, and such a lovely outcome! Everything about this is absolutely gorgeous! I love it, Neko! I'm seeing so much improvement in your art and especially this piece. The eyes look very pretty in this style, and I love the view of it (Like how you can see from above). Thank you so much! *hugs*
my critique! here it be.
the eyes, good job on them, they have depth. staring in them you want to look around in them from the depth to see more detail
the shading. again improvement. you went from shading abit all over to a more focal light source that makes it more realistic and plausible
good job on the folds of the clothing, looks to have a shape and contour to match the subject.
background again good job on making it interesting and not just cut and paste char onto it, it has folds, texture and depth. makes the watcher think its a shot from above and not just floating in the air.
to work on, now for the not so praise stuff, the line work. this is what i mean. well drawn but the thick lines on contours, they play with the eyes sometimes making the subject seem cut/paste on other times blended abit better for depth. example of this is the hair on the left side of the picture that strand, it looks like hair! its a success but the bold black border line seperates it too much from the background, hair is more fine so should blend into background instead of clear cut. a more fine line is the chin. it looks seperated from the neck, which it is. but its a finer line so it blends in more.
the tail has many examples of thick and thin lines making bold seperations or blending in smoothly.
all in all, you wanted to improve your skill, you're doing it. i can see the diffrence between my first comission and this one. my opinion is you should work on the usage of thin/thick lines more
my apreciation for this is verry high for anyone reading and thinking i'm disecting this cold and cruel as if i can do better, which i cant. im just giving my opinion on what is to me good and what needs more work which is something neko has asked for in the past.
again keep up the work you're on the right path to getting even better!
the eyes, good job on them, they have depth. staring in them you want to look around in them from the depth to see more detail
the shading. again improvement. you went from shading abit all over to a more focal light source that makes it more realistic and plausible
good job on the folds of the clothing, looks to have a shape and contour to match the subject.
background again good job on making it interesting and not just cut and paste char onto it, it has folds, texture and depth. makes the watcher think its a shot from above and not just floating in the air.
to work on, now for the not so praise stuff, the line work. this is what i mean. well drawn but the thick lines on contours, they play with the eyes sometimes making the subject seem cut/paste on other times blended abit better for depth. example of this is the hair on the left side of the picture that strand, it looks like hair! its a success but the bold black border line seperates it too much from the background, hair is more fine so should blend into background instead of clear cut. a more fine line is the chin. it looks seperated from the neck, which it is. but its a finer line so it blends in more.
the tail has many examples of thick and thin lines making bold seperations or blending in smoothly.
all in all, you wanted to improve your skill, you're doing it. i can see the diffrence between my first comission and this one. my opinion is you should work on the usage of thin/thick lines more
my apreciation for this is verry high for anyone reading and thinking i'm disecting this cold and cruel as if i can do better, which i cant. im just giving my opinion on what is to me good and what needs more work which is something neko has asked for in the past.
again keep up the work you're on the right path to getting even better!
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