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you'll find out later. he explains where he's from. i forgot to mention in his original description that he's actually a winged argonian.
honestly, i dont know their diet. never read it in any of the lore i've read about them, but then again i havnt read much about the actual tribes, or about the cities w/in Black Marsh. Compared to most, i have quite a bit of knowledge on argonians, but its mostly general stuff, nowhere near as detailed as i'd like to be. just havnt had time to read up more on them.
honestly, i dont know their diet. never read it in any of the lore i've read about them, but then again i havnt read much about the actual tribes, or about the cities w/in Black Marsh. Compared to most, i have quite a bit of knowledge on argonians, but its mostly general stuff, nowhere near as detailed as i'd like to be. just havnt had time to read up more on them.
Not bad. Not bad at all.
A few things:
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"It's alright, everything is fine now. The marauders are dead. I killed them and rescued you. You should eat now though. You've been asleep for 3 days, did you know that?"
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Who is talking? The fact that the female argonian looked right up at the still unnamed male argonian just before this could indicate that its her talking, since it doesn't specifically say he's the one saying it. (Even though common sense tells us this would just be silly for her to be saying this). And yes, He said she said gets redundant, but it should really only be left out in the cases of extended conversations.
One thing I often find useful is splitting the quote to indicate the speaker and mood, then continuing it again after words.
Example, take our quote and apply the forementioned formula:
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"It's alright, everything is fine now," the male reassured the female in his arms in a soft, soothing voice. "The marauders are dead. I killed them and rescued you. You should eat now though. You've been asleep for 3 days, did you know that?"
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Here we kill two birds with one stone: Not only are we confirming that it is indeed the male who is talking, but we are also setting the mood and tone of voice.
A few things:
----
"It's alright, everything is fine now. The marauders are dead. I killed them and rescued you. You should eat now though. You've been asleep for 3 days, did you know that?"
----
Who is talking? The fact that the female argonian looked right up at the still unnamed male argonian just before this could indicate that its her talking, since it doesn't specifically say he's the one saying it. (Even though common sense tells us this would just be silly for her to be saying this). And yes, He said she said gets redundant, but it should really only be left out in the cases of extended conversations.
One thing I often find useful is splitting the quote to indicate the speaker and mood, then continuing it again after words.
Example, take our quote and apply the forementioned formula:
----
"It's alright, everything is fine now," the male reassured the female in his arms in a soft, soothing voice. "The marauders are dead. I killed them and rescued you. You should eat now though. You've been asleep for 3 days, did you know that?"
----
Here we kill two birds with one stone: Not only are we confirming that it is indeed the male who is talking, but we are also setting the mood and tone of voice.
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