
Amy rose try The bubble tea challenge :3 ...She did it thanks tails help of corse -w-;
here the story by my friend
cartoonwatcher1234
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33722551/
here the story by my friend

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33722551/
Category All / Sonic
Species Hedgehog
Size 775 x 700px
File Size 234.8 kB
The watcher has summoned me to maybe offer some advice. Though my use of words on an image tends to be hard to do XD. Normally id do a redline of sorts.
I think your proportions should be worked on a bit. Sure these are cartoony and exaggerated but there should still be some level of balance in teh figure.
The way the penstrokes looks say that you try to get each curve down in one stroke. That tends to be good with some things like hair but body lines you should try to slow down a bit so they aren't too wonky. rounder big things do help to have thicker strokes to them but you should try to build up the line with several strokes rather than one quick one.
Other bits are a little more nitpicky and personal opinion but her head and hands are a bit small compared to the rest of the body.
mmmm theres other things off like the torso and the hips and waist but im not sure how to describe those in words S: . if you dont mind, i might try to draw up a rough of this
I think your proportions should be worked on a bit. Sure these are cartoony and exaggerated but there should still be some level of balance in teh figure.
The way the penstrokes looks say that you try to get each curve down in one stroke. That tends to be good with some things like hair but body lines you should try to slow down a bit so they aren't too wonky. rounder big things do help to have thicker strokes to them but you should try to build up the line with several strokes rather than one quick one.
Other bits are a little more nitpicky and personal opinion but her head and hands are a bit small compared to the rest of the body.
mmmm theres other things off like the torso and the hips and waist but im not sure how to describe those in words S: . if you dont mind, i might try to draw up a rough of this
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