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Aliens have invaded.The world is going to shit, and control is no longer for humans to possess. Thousands of people are now dragons. How are people going to weather this crisis? Find out, as we return to the travails of the Schwarzkopfs in the Northwest United States.
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Sequel To: A New Purpose http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28061365/
Recommended Reading (Indirect Sequel to): The Complexities of Thumper
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29978739/
Apologies for the incomplete, and incorrect, previous iteration of this story. It should have never escaped my notice, yet it did, and it was just recently brought to my attention. I have decided to just delete the text version as only the last few paragraphs are beyond the text limits for this website. There is no way to break this one into two pieces without reworking the entire ending, which I am not willing to do at this point. However, I hope that the damn PDF works this time. I do not know why the old one would not after several attempts.
TF
Dragons
Sci-Fi
Family
New World
Sequel To: A New Purpose http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28061365/
Recommended Reading (Indirect Sequel to): The Complexities of Thumper
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29978739/
Apologies for the incomplete, and incorrect, previous iteration of this story. It should have never escaped my notice, yet it did, and it was just recently brought to my attention. I have decided to just delete the text version as only the last few paragraphs are beyond the text limits for this website. There is no way to break this one into two pieces without reworking the entire ending, which I am not willing to do at this point. However, I hope that the damn PDF works this time. I do not know why the old one would not after several attempts.
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 101px
File Size 504.3 kB
Listed in Folders
I’m confused a bit, I’m switching back and fourth between this one and original part 8 of learning to fall and they are completely different. Does this one of replace or supplement the original? The beginning is completely different,
I’m still on part 7, so please help a fan out...
I’m still on part 7, so please help a fan out...
Got to sat I love Angie. If there's anything more convincing that dragons are people then the boundless source of innocence that is a six year old child then I don't know how one can convince humanity of this truth.
However, I do think you need to do a better job of fleshing out your antagonist characters. Even with a character like sparrow there she be some sort of reasoning for his actions. Having that resoning be something as nebulous as some conversation with some unnamed military folk at the pentagon is not enough. It explains why he feels like he can get away with antagonizing the dragons, but not why he willing to do so in the first place.
However, I do think you need to do a better job of fleshing out your antagonist characters. Even with a character like sparrow there she be some sort of reasoning for his actions. Having that resoning be something as nebulous as some conversation with some unnamed military folk at the pentagon is not enough. It explains why he feels like he can get away with antagonizing the dragons, but not why he willing to do so in the first place.
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