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unformated version of: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/33764155/
Kinda out of the blue, but this is something I wanted to do for a while. Yesterday I just felt like getting it done, so I jumped on it.
This is a clean version of Light Escapes, a novel I wrote in the summer of 2015 about a girl who drowns her problems in a form of escapism through online games. Mostly MMOs, and this specific one: Skyline Online, she ends up finding a pet dragon (eastern) that doesn't act like one should. I won't spoil anything past that, but there's a lot of... Experience in the mindset behind this and her actions.
There was one sex scene in the second act that has been replaced with a new one. There's still a tad bit of nudity after that, but hardly worth the mature tag. If you do wish to read the version with the adultery, feel free to. It's somewhere around here, likely in a folder/pool/whatever this has been paired with. Hell, just search for "Light Escapes" in the site's search option and odds are you'll find it.
Regardless, this is just something I kinda wanted to get done. I'm not sure why, exactly, but I just... Did. It's not going to harm anything anyway.
Light Escapes © Dangerkids
Trinity © Amaranthe
And We Run © Within Temptation (featuring Xzibit)
Intoxicated © Lacuna Coil
Dead Space © Linkin Park & Eminem
Sky © Annisokay
Kinda out of the blue, but this is something I wanted to do for a while. Yesterday I just felt like getting it done, so I jumped on it.
This is a clean version of Light Escapes, a novel I wrote in the summer of 2015 about a girl who drowns her problems in a form of escapism through online games. Mostly MMOs, and this specific one: Skyline Online, she ends up finding a pet dragon (eastern) that doesn't act like one should. I won't spoil anything past that, but there's a lot of... Experience in the mindset behind this and her actions.
There was one sex scene in the second act that has been replaced with a new one. There's still a tad bit of nudity after that, but hardly worth the mature tag. If you do wish to read the version with the adultery, feel free to. It's somewhere around here, likely in a folder/pool/whatever this has been paired with. Hell, just search for "Light Escapes" in the site's search option and odds are you'll find it.
Regardless, this is just something I kinda wanted to get done. I'm not sure why, exactly, but I just... Did. It's not going to harm anything anyway.
Light Escapes © Dangerkids
Trinity © Amaranthe
And We Run © Within Temptation (featuring Xzibit)
Intoxicated © Lacuna Coil
Dead Space © Linkin Park & Eminem
Sky © Annisokay
Category Story / All
Species Eastern Dragon
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 402.3 kB
Listed in Folders
Thanks mate It really does mean a lot when someone takes the time to read one of these older stories, let alone a clean version!
Yeah, I used to do a lot more fluff and dialog in the older stories. Sadly, the effort put in just didn't seem to be worth it. Why? I can't tell you. Maybe it's because it makes it look longer? Higher word count = intimidating? I donno. I still try these once in a while, even did two this year, but they're almost never worth the months of planning and work for how often people see/read them.
Yeah, I used to do a lot more fluff and dialog in the older stories. Sadly, the effort put in just didn't seem to be worth it. Why? I can't tell you. Maybe it's because it makes it look longer? Higher word count = intimidating? I donno. I still try these once in a while, even did two this year, but they're almost never worth the months of planning and work for how often people see/read them.
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