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Good lines and cloth, also good shading range on latex. Makes it look so shiny. Hmm probably it is what previous image lacks. Wider shading for those dogs, as it looks comparatively as glossy as environment, while bike and rider is some what standout, but again, it is still hard to tell if it would made that image better. So I like it but I like this one even more.

Thanks. yes, i like this one too. This is a new feeling for me, I used to not like all my works to one degree or another, but now I like the latest works to one degree or another and I think I'm on the right way.

In the previous drawing, I rather drew a motorcycle and wheels in motion. I will have a lot of shots with the technique at high speed or in motion, so I will try to draw it more often, placing quick accents, no more.

And here I decided that my comm info is not very clear to those around me and I seemed to shine off the pictures, so I decided to try to make the simplification more profitable and shine, leaving at the same time almost the same color, with work in tone.

I try to make the next art already in Semirealism, more details, more colors, better rendering of reflections, rendering and more. So I can more clearly separate the types of work in the price list, now there is a simple toon and a toon and an illustration, which is somewhat misleading. Plus, I started trying to make a simple toon, like a toon, in the end, something was incomplete when I stopped a job at a certain point. And at the same time the line appeared in the illustrations, after that I decided that it was time to stop and make more explicit boundaries, such as sketch, toon, semirealism and illustration, this would be more clear and the difference between them would be more noticeable.

Probably you are right with motorcycle. And don't blame yourself too much that image is much more complex on composition, here it is a bit simplier as it is only one character.

Simplifications are fine if they made correctly, but it feels like something was left out on that image too much. I wished I could tell more precisely but my experience is not enough. Try not to change the style you like and to shift and experiment. Personally I liked blurs you draw at certain places, and it is quite understandable that you might not quite have grab on those while you experimenting. ^^ And yes maybe some separation to better understanding what you want might be good too.

Yes, both the background and the character are simpler here, as these are the poses I already know. I almost didn’t draw motorcycles and cars in dynamics, which is why the most difficulties were connected with it.

This image is too simple or something, I think it gives away with a conveyor belt and this gives the impression that something is wrong here. Yes, that’s why I wrote that the line appeared in the illustration, as a whole it began to spoil it. Now in the process there is an illustration of three characters, but most likely I will finish it next year. I will try to get there earlier, but I only have one art left and then I need to make a comm story about Husky.

It is ok on complexity not everything should be super complex. I just trying to be fair to your other art, and when I say something wrong I am trying to be truthful, but it doesn't means I do not acknowledge steps in direction of complexity you took. So please don't say it is conveyor belt it is not. I never felt, I only ment that there is only one character and simple wall, no other complexities so less opportunities to make mistakes. It wasn't mistake or bad thing. It is just how this art came out.

It doesn't makes it better or worse, it is just different. If you understand what I am trying to say. Well still curious about that umbreon comic, you wanted to make, but I understand how busy it can get and your other art is good too. So it is ok.^^ And this art is still good.

I’m more about the same type, I tried to do this work on speed, so it seems to me that it is a bit like a conveyor belt. In any case, I’ll see what happens next, while the time / result ratio here satisfies me.

Yes, there is only a character and a wall. Here, I rather tried style, simplification, and I drew little cities, concrete, etc., so I will try in industrial landscapes and there are still many walls ahead.

As for Umbreon, I thought a lot, even thought to try to find a crater who can make a latex Umbreon suit, more precisely, paws and a head, the rest is Catfish. So, ideally, there could be more than just comics. :P But most likely I will postpone it all until next year, as well as the continuation of comics about the Tiger and about ComicCoon

Ah I see well it is hard to draw unfamiliar anthros, so I understand you, they are not quite animal and how head sits, and rest of the body looks is a bit more complex, add that umbreon sorta has unusual anime like muzzle and it is hard to convey aesthetics. I am with you on this. Well sounds cool he-he. Well do what you enjoy and pace how you feel like it.

Well it is with almost any activity, but if you want to shake things up it is a good too, after all art is not only mechanical transfer of images, but also reflection of reflection of the material(external) world on ideal (internal) world. So feeling what you like to draw is as important, so if you feel like you need to draw different backgrounds it would be always welcome he-he.

Yes, exactly, I’ll still try to make Umbreon different heads and all that in order to see how best. But in general, I perceive it as a gradual path to Renamon, Umbreon can be done through the body, even the shape of the head is more round and suitable to hide the human head without much effort. Renamon already has feral paws, a thin elongated body (And I have rather broad shoulders), so there are many difficulties with the performance of Renamon, like a latex suit. And Renamon has a flatter and sharper head, here I obviously need some experience in wearing latex Fursuit. And it seems to me that Umbreon will look too fetish for going to conventions in it, but Renamon will already be more than sfw, since nothing unnecessary will stick out from under the latex. In any case, the Umbreon can emphasize the body, which is pretty cool. And his head is simpler than the head of a panther, I probably would have gone for something like that in my physique.

Here I agree with you, but I think that when I start drawing for money, I need some kind of stability so that customers understand what they will get from me, which is why I will try to make stronger differences between the types of commission. I think this will bring more clarity to others. Very often, small differences are also not particularly striking without the presence of certain skills. At the same time, a simplified style will gradually allow me to simplify characters and backgrounds to the stage of quick drawing of comics. Only the main thing is that in general the quality of the art does not fall along with such simplification. And then I'm going in this direction.

Nah trying to say that art is bad comnmodity in general, and if you want to do comissions you just need at least be able to do what they want more styles is not necessarily bad, well it can be detrement to getting commissioner base, but it would be also more varied. I just diffirentiating in my critiques those stuff. Some art has really complex background and it interferes with main part of image so it is harder to draw it in good fassion. And this image is simple so it fits better. It doesn't means you need to stop drawing complex backgrounds, in fact it is awesome to see you trying to do it.

Composition and good background(sometimes detailed sometimes not) adds extra depth to the image. But it is sorta adds lots to prize and I see why some prefer white backgrounds but it is another reason why art is bad commodity. I sorta tend not to sell my stories either or do commissions. Because for me it is matter of expression, you can't sell your feelings, you can only express them to others.

Well And I thought Umbreon is not just a suit but also transformation. And what I ment it is general anthro idea is hard to grasp as even though ferals are somewhat similar to us it is just somewhat, the head attached at different angle to then neck so bone structure needs to be rethought then there are digitigrade legs which need proper proportions to look good, and I think the rest is ok, oh yeah handpaws and paws on anthro should look differently as it is completely imeginary thing and it is not about how it looks but how you and everyone expect it to look.

That's right, but gradually I have less and less choice. I have not decided exactly what I want. My part-time will soon end and I will have the choice to either draw or return to my main job, then there will be practically no time for drawing, but then money will reappear. So far I believe that I like to draw and I will try something like that. Perhaps even if I have to draw something that I don’t really like. In the worst case, I will stop all comics and illustrations because a lot of time is spent on them. To prevent this, I'm now trying to work at speed, however, it still takes almost all my free time and I can forget to congratulate a relative, have breakfast at night or something like that. I hope that my drawing is not yet on the verge of madness.

That's right, a good background adds history to the details, creates an atmosphere, and more. And I am not against complex backgrounds, they are now in conflict with time, no more. I see that the older I get, the more different things appear. For example, now I have almost no time for tutorials and other hobbies. Therefore, it is difficult for me to lead life on different sites at the same time. I'm still going to revive my twitter, but usually at the end of the day I’m not up to it. I have not yet learned how to combine drawing and real life, probably this is generally impossible. In my free time I eat, clean, cook, go to the store or sleep. Not that it worried me, but that’s why it’s hard for me now to spend more time on good backgrounds. I will try to solve this problem in the future, but I don’t know how yet.

But even with such a transformation, Umbreon may not work out very well, so I also put myself on a to-do list someday, to do something like a reference on my own with Umbreon and Renamon costumes, like a skunk reference in my id. Then it will be possible to visualize the crafters how it should look, the same tattoos on the body, they can also be depicted in different ways, narrower, wider, thinner, thicker, oval, circle and so on. Well, for anthro, you can change the feral appearance so that it looks more interesting and advantageous.