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Usually I would just go and reupload the previous submission file, but this animation got a lot of helpful suggestions from people, and I don't want it to ever be said that I don't consider these things! So! As per the critique I got, I extended the last little part just a tad to make it smoother, added in a little more bounce for the ounce, and redrew her face entirely in one frame just because I didn't like it.
So here you are! T-Ko jumps into view for your amusement yet again. :)
So here you are! T-Ko jumps into view for your amusement yet again. :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fanart
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 241 x 279px
File Size 184.7 kB
Well, let me actually explain why that is, if I may!
After a while of drawing nipples, I realized that they are wonderful and can add to any picture if you work them correctly, I began to wonder what it would be like if I began to exploit the weird androgynous cartoon nudity that most 'toon animals have, with my sense of proportion and shape. Tailsko, being one of the more innocent of the characters I regularly draw, felt like a good candidate for this kind of experiment, to see where I can take it.
After a while of drawing nipples, I realized that they are wonderful and can add to any picture if you work them correctly, I began to wonder what it would be like if I began to exploit the weird androgynous cartoon nudity that most 'toon animals have, with my sense of proportion and shape. Tailsko, being one of the more innocent of the characters I regularly draw, felt like a good candidate for this kind of experiment, to see where I can take it.
wow... you put alot of thought into one minor part of the picture. i must admit my respect for you has risen considerably.
despite the adult nature of the jiggling this really did capture the more 'innocent times' back in the day when the furries didn't instantly bring sex to my head when i saw them on saturday morning.
despite the adult nature of the jiggling this really did capture the more 'innocent times' back in the day when the furries didn't instantly bring sex to my head when i saw them on saturday morning.
Ah yes. Gotta get it just right or it looks weird. Amazing what a frame or two here and there can do though.
Agh this makes me want to try my hand at animating even more now that I figured out how to make animated .gifs. Always wanted to do flash too, but it's expensive and I have no time for that either, and only recently developed the necessary skill.
Agh this makes me want to try my hand at animating even more now that I figured out how to make animated .gifs. Always wanted to do flash too, but it's expensive and I have no time for that either, and only recently developed the necessary skill.
Well of course it's off. There's no background, her cheek fluff and hair doesn't bounce, her tails should probably be flicking about, she gets a tad long-necked near the middle, her thumbs-up arm should bounce a little as she rights it into position from the fast swing, all sorts of stuff.
Sadly, all that takes something that I'm still learning: Longterm frame planning.
Sadly, all that takes something that I'm still learning: Longterm frame planning.
Definitely much better! I like it a lot. :)
One thing that stands out for possible further improvement for me tho, is her face. You know when she's heavin' 'em tittays out, and her eyes are closed, then they're out and bouncing? There's a bit of a contrast between the smooth animation of her bouncing bosoms, and the sudden change from closed eyes and looking up, to open eyes looking down at them. Maybe it's just me, but it seems a little jarring. :P
But! Amazing work none the less :)
One thing that stands out for possible further improvement for me tho, is her face. You know when she's heavin' 'em tittays out, and her eyes are closed, then they're out and bouncing? There's a bit of a contrast between the smooth animation of her bouncing bosoms, and the sudden change from closed eyes and looking up, to open eyes looking down at them. Maybe it's just me, but it seems a little jarring. :P
But! Amazing work none the less :)
Hmm. Let's see... After she bounces up, her tail and cheeks don't move enough, I think. She should probably continue with her pose and bend forward while twirling her tails, so as to give a bit of a breeze to her backside. And then she could very nice spread her legs so we could see her divine cleavage from another angle, giving us a much better idea of her excitement over being animated. *Nods* Yes, those are definitely some improvements that could be made
Of course, I'm completely kidding XD You've added some very nice additions; it runs much smoother and sexier ^^ I can't wait to see this bouncing everywhere as your avatar, especially where you've posted a lot in one place so we can watch the plethora of bouncing tittehs jiggle in unison ;3
Of course, I'm completely kidding XD You've added some very nice additions; it runs much smoother and sexier ^^ I can't wait to see this bouncing everywhere as your avatar, especially where you've posted a lot in one place so we can watch the plethora of bouncing tittehs jiggle in unison ;3
Nice Gainaxing :)
One more thing to think of is the rule of overlapping motion. Which you have down perfectly with her breasts (see above link). The rule would also apply to her head as she first pops up, and slightly less as her breasts pop free of the ring. Not as much as her boobage, but just noticable, maybe 1/6 the length of her head.
One more thing to think of is the rule of overlapping motion. Which you have down perfectly with her breasts (see above link). The rule would also apply to her head as she first pops up, and slightly less as her breasts pop free of the ring. Not as much as her boobage, but just noticable, maybe 1/6 the length of her head.
The animation is one of the best that you've ever seen, but as you do love it, I'm going to try and find everything I can with it that seems off so it can be perfected.
!) At the apex of her first jump, where she puts her head up, but her boobs are still hidden, her hands skip a frame and warp from together to spread. The white of her right (our left) is also slightly mishappen at this time.
Gonna be looking for more, as we all know we'll be seeing this avatar for a long time.
!) At the apex of her first jump, where she puts her head up, but her boobs are still hidden, her hands skip a frame and warp from together to spread. The white of her right (our left) is also slightly mishappen at this time.
Gonna be looking for more, as we all know we'll be seeing this avatar for a long time.
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