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Pleasure Island RP 3 - All For Her
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born2beagator and I had a bit of a battle RP. He was dead set on a specific ending, and I was dead set on creating the ending from the story. At first, it went well; things were playing out quite well.
Then Adomm appeared, and everything changed.
Adomm doesn't just transform people. She changes people. No brainwashing, no messing with the mind, none of that. She simply instigates change. By far, she is one of the most scariest entities I know. But that's exactly why I love seeing what happens next.
As you read, you'll find she didn't just change a character. She changed the writer as well. It was... chaotic. I no longer saw his ending as a viable one for how the story played out. So we fought. This is a story borne out of two writers smashing their istorytelling ideals against each other.
And it is long. Sorry about that.
born2beagator and I had a bit of a battle RP. He was dead set on a specific ending, and I was dead set on creating the ending from the story. At first, it went well; things were playing out quite well.Then Adomm appeared, and everything changed.
Adomm doesn't just transform people. She changes people. No brainwashing, no messing with the mind, none of that. She simply instigates change. By far, she is one of the most scariest entities I know. But that's exactly why I love seeing what happens next.
As you read, you'll find she didn't just change a character. She changed the writer as well. It was... chaotic. I no longer saw his ending as a viable one for how the story played out. So we fought. This is a story borne out of two writers smashing their istorytelling ideals against each other.
And it is long. Sorry about that.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Donkey / Mule
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 161.9 kB
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