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The resulting surge in size and power was giving the salazzle quite the head rush as each beat of her heart was adding dizzying amounts of size to her already-godlike form, easily losing her grip on her home world as it joined her. Aside from the rush of the growth, that same pang of hunger would come back once again, the moon now just a crumb to her as she glanced around the void for anything. The other planets in the system were either too small or too far away for her to reach within a 'reasonable' time frame, though the brightest object in the system, the sun, was all the more tempting now that she saw that even from her distance to it, was looking all the more appetizing to her.
Turning herself, she would start to 'swim' over towards the star, the planet she once held somehow nestling itself among her form since she was more than large enough for it too to be a crumb in comparison, not even minding if she came close to or even knocked a different planet out of the way, in one case even starting to orbit around her form instead of the star, however brief it would have been. They wouldn't dissuade the titan from her path, soon having to right herself as best as she could once she was nearing the star. Already she could see the effects that her larger form was having on it, pillars of fire-y gas wafting from the surface of the star towards her, a smile on her face as she brushed a finger through some of them and even felt the warmth it had to her, far too large to be properly affected by its heat. She would even poke at the star, seeing her finger pass through the mile-long pillars of flame curving and coiling around the digit, being stopped when the star was surprisingly solid for her. The smile she had would widen as she reached her other hand over and worked on grabbing hold of it, feeling the warmth spreading throughout her form as she embraced it.
To those watching would notice some signs of discoloration among her hide, going from its dark violet to a contrasting snow white for those parts, while the rest looked to be left relatively unaltered, a slow process to the salazzle as her jaws parted, ready to carry out the next part. By some method, the face of the star closest to the jaws would distort, swirling before pulling out up and towards them, reaching out much like a funnel cloud would when starting to form a tornado. The swirling, curving pillar of flame would reach up and into the salazzle's jaws, spreading its warmth throughout as it was then directed towards her gullet, slithering down it much like all that have gone down it before, furthering the warmth throughout her body. Despite being inaudible, she would let out a sound of content, pausing for a moment before redoubling her efforts to basically suck up the star she held much like the clouds from before.
Even stars were becoming a source of food for her, and yet she was still surging in size...and even power that was starting to awaken in her.
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Voting results of Round Thirteen.
Snack: 47 votes.
Play: 36 votes.
Other: 3 votes.
Rest: 1 vote.
Total: 87 votes.
Potency value results.
Snack: 47 x 20 = +940% growth.
Play: 36 x 20 = +720% growth.
Other: 3 x 20 = +60% growth.
Rest: 1 x 20 = +20% growth.
Ease of calculations(no effect on growth): +100%.
Total: +1,740% current size increase.
New size: 130,978.09 mi./210,788.8 km. >> 2,279,018.77 mi./3,667,725.18 km. Numbers were rounded to the nearest hundredth.
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Welp, you folks just made her blow well past one million miles in size, two at that, and she's now huge enough that our star is a meal to her. She isn't even an astronomical unit in size yet, and already she's gonna possibly be larger than our solar system at this rate. >u>;;
The 'solar funnel' effect was interesting to try, while also being something that took longer than anticipated...
I'm also slow in just now realizing that all space shots of her had her facing to the left...
Round fourteen poll is closed. Thank you for voting!
Salazzle © Nintendo, GAMEFREAK, Creatures Inc..
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The resulting surge in size and power was giving the salazzle quite the head rush as each beat of her heart was adding dizzying amounts of size to her already-godlike form, easily losing her grip on her home world as it joined her. Aside from the rush of the growth, that same pang of hunger would come back once again, the moon now just a crumb to her as she glanced around the void for anything. The other planets in the system were either too small or too far away for her to reach within a 'reasonable' time frame, though the brightest object in the system, the sun, was all the more tempting now that she saw that even from her distance to it, was looking all the more appetizing to her.
Turning herself, she would start to 'swim' over towards the star, the planet she once held somehow nestling itself among her form since she was more than large enough for it too to be a crumb in comparison, not even minding if she came close to or even knocked a different planet out of the way, in one case even starting to orbit around her form instead of the star, however brief it would have been. They wouldn't dissuade the titan from her path, soon having to right herself as best as she could once she was nearing the star. Already she could see the effects that her larger form was having on it, pillars of fire-y gas wafting from the surface of the star towards her, a smile on her face as she brushed a finger through some of them and even felt the warmth it had to her, far too large to be properly affected by its heat. She would even poke at the star, seeing her finger pass through the mile-long pillars of flame curving and coiling around the digit, being stopped when the star was surprisingly solid for her. The smile she had would widen as she reached her other hand over and worked on grabbing hold of it, feeling the warmth spreading throughout her form as she embraced it.
To those watching would notice some signs of discoloration among her hide, going from its dark violet to a contrasting snow white for those parts, while the rest looked to be left relatively unaltered, a slow process to the salazzle as her jaws parted, ready to carry out the next part. By some method, the face of the star closest to the jaws would distort, swirling before pulling out up and towards them, reaching out much like a funnel cloud would when starting to form a tornado. The swirling, curving pillar of flame would reach up and into the salazzle's jaws, spreading its warmth throughout as it was then directed towards her gullet, slithering down it much like all that have gone down it before, furthering the warmth throughout her body. Despite being inaudible, she would let out a sound of content, pausing for a moment before redoubling her efforts to basically suck up the star she held much like the clouds from before.
Even stars were becoming a source of food for her, and yet she was still surging in size...and even power that was starting to awaken in her.
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Voting results of Round Thirteen.
Snack: 47 votes.
Play: 36 votes.
Other: 3 votes.
Rest: 1 vote.
Total: 87 votes.
Potency value results.
Snack: 47 x 20 = +940% growth.
Play: 36 x 20 = +720% growth.
Other: 3 x 20 = +60% growth.
Rest: 1 x 20 = +20% growth.
Ease of calculations(no effect on growth): +100%.
Total: +1,740% current size increase.
New size: 130,978.09 mi./210,788.8 km. >> 2,279,018.77 mi./3,667,725.18 km. Numbers were rounded to the nearest hundredth.
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Welp, you folks just made her blow well past one million miles in size, two at that, and she's now huge enough that our star is a meal to her. She isn't even an astronomical unit in size yet, and already she's gonna possibly be larger than our solar system at this rate. >u>;;
The 'solar funnel' effect was interesting to try, while also being something that took longer than anticipated...
Round fourteen poll is closed. Thank you for voting!
Salazzle © Nintendo, GAMEFREAK, Creatures Inc..
Category All / Macro / Micro
Species Pokemon
Size 1920 x 1080px
File Size 1.01 MB
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