this is a random chapter from thee book I'm writing

from what you can read and understand tell me what you think

If you want the missing clues let me know I'll explain real fast.

P.s
this is ALL a dream...the girl (Amanda) who is dreaming has become unconscience of loss of blood. An this is what she dreams of...

wait....nvm

CLUES:
Amanda has been held captive from two vampires (Drake and Frankie). She has seen two of her best friends mururder by them to force her to come along with them. She has been living UNKNOWN to the rest of the world in a small Vampire town in the middle of nowhere.
In this chapter she is dreaming of what she wishes was true.....