Relaxing.

Dystilia remains the only place on Terra that is free from the Other World. The combined power of the guardians and life force hold back not only the Other World, but the black mist as well. Yagami comes here seeking the legendary blades of light and darkness, the only weapons capable of defeating Ghaust. What awaits him is the Cave Of Trials where he must walk both the path of light and darkness, and defeat both guardians to prove his worth for the blades.

Not to seem a dick, but this sounds MORE than vaguely familiar.
Bit of an odd, even slightly creepy, coincidence.

If you don't get why, all my characters are from Terra, pretty generic name, I know.
But what got me, was the blades of light and darkness. A story that I wrote MANY years ago, that is very boring an uninspired in retrospect followed the regular RPG/anime adventure cliche of collect these items beat the big bad.

So, on Terra, Korah needs to collect the soul blades, of which there are eight, light and dark being the easiest and hardest to obtain respectively.
Theres even a flash series based off of it.

http://blizzardblade.sirtopeia.com/animations.html

If you don't want to leave FA to see it, I also have the videos uploaded to my profile.

As to the song itself, its very nice.
Could use just a little bit less synth, though the leads are nice, I could have done with a less synthfocused approach.
But thats just me.

Oh wow, ok let me give specific details on the story *inhales deeply.*
A long time ago theere were people (humans), and furry (Furina), that lived on the same planet, Terra. Out of the all Furina none wre more powerful then the dragon race, who used special blades called Dragon Blades. While various dragons are born, each to their own element such as fire, only 1 holy and 1 dark dragon are born each cycle. Any dragon could use a dragon blade, except for the light and dark dragons, they had a special blade that none other than the holy/dark dragon could wield. A great and terrible war broke out, it's origins a complete mystery, wiping out the holy and dark dragons, as well as countless human and furina. Out of the chaos a dragon was born, wielding both light and darkness, and unified the blades, crushing the darkness that threatened to destroy the world. Generations pass and a new war begins, this time the existance of humans are threatened. The leader of the war is Ghaust, the dark dragon. He and the holy dragon, Schala, fight in his castle, but she is no match for him. To stop him from destroying everything, she seals him in suspended time at the cost of her life, and the two blades are placed in the guardians (the holy and dark dragons of the first war) care until the one born from light and darkness comes for them. After the war ends, the elders of humans, furina, and dragons use an anvient crystal to create a mirror image of Terra, Earth, and send the humans there. There's alot more to the plot then that, but just wanted to give the overview of the story. And in case you're wondering, the blades have names. Light is Seraphim, dark Necrosis. Hope this clarified things a bit.

And the lights are out, please excuse the two typos: theere (there) and anvient (ancient).

Sounds pretty good.
I kind of have to laugh though.
My terra has the Neodammerai/Angelis war which gave rise to Humans and Occurian.

The blizzard being separate, and the key to fusing the other blades...

I think I could really get into this world of yours, it has so many similarities to mine.

I really should read more of your stuff.