all different sorts of couples? That sounds like a good idea for a CD, I like the pic to btw ^^

Lmfao @ look and fav.
I don't know what to tell you. I honestly think it looks great. Pose and foreshortening is pretty epic.

Will the real pervert please stand up? XD

Quiet, you. >:I

Pointy boobs are pointy, but that's all I can really say.

You forgot delicious.

Pointy boobs are pointy... and delicious.

For whatever reason, the girl on top's torso and head remind me of starfighter's foxes and the girl on the bottom reminds me of onta's work aside from the lack of trappiness. If I were to offer you any non-positive feedback on this, it would be related to the upper girl's abdomen/hip/leg juncture. Something about it bothers me minimally. I think maybe the belly seems lower and yet the leg is highlighted as being much higher where the dark shading of the bikini bottom is (basically the spot where the leg, bikini, and belly all meet and there's a sort of shaded triangle pointed towards the upper left corner).

Oh, and as a matter of personal preference, I've seen my fair share of pointy boobs like that on women that have a verrrry slight concave slope to their breasts (slender persuasion). A good example of what I am talking about can be seen in Kacey's work here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3264498 ). It's nice to see girls that aren't all walking around with DDs. Proportionally, you've done a great job in my eyes.

I'm a bit disappointed because I know you have a fairly solid understanding on anatomy. The girl on the top has quite a few flaws that I can see, such as her tail in general, and her muzzle being at a very odd angle. I also can't really tell what species she's supposed to be. Her face says cat or fox, but her tail says otter. I do like the positioning for her as a whole, though. The pose is very interesting and I like how you can see the movement of her slowly creeping up over the girl on the bottom.

The girl on the bottom I'm more fond of. There's a lot of nice expression in her body language, and I really like how you handled the foreshortening on her leg. I guess the species argument goes for her, too, but it's not as bothersome to me as top-girl. My only real complaint with her is her shoulder in correlation to her torso. It looks odd and out of place.

I do like the limited color pallet and how soft it feels, but this image seems more to me as a warm-up, as opposed to a full drawing, which I'm assuming was intended--hence why you're looking for feedback.

As far as the CD goes, just please keep in mind to have variety. Different species, body types, situations, clothing, pairings, ect. It's the spice of life, after all. :U

I think the facial anatomy could use some clearing up, as it's pretty formalized - the top girl's head especially. It also seems a little small in proportion to her body. True of both of them, but especially one on top IMO.

Uh, also the coat textures could use some work - a little texture brushing would fix that, I guess.

I'm not a visual artist except as a very, verrrrryyyy amateur pursuit, but I tend to be absolutely anal about fur textures. To a fault, I would say, because I haven't been able to seriously attend to other aspects of anatomy. If you have some advice for a shitscribbler like me, I'd love to hear back.

Sir, overall I would give this a B+; because except for the problems I noted, it's very nice.

i like this piece its got movement but were is the emotions gonna be shy or horrible scared to dissapointing her lover? or just scared to death about being in love? or just scared of the first time being loved by another woman?

this is.... just hot.

Nice work

This is too much awesome. Maybe because it's 3 AM, but it feels like you've perfectly captured the mood of this picture.

shhh i can't critique
but the heads seem a little small..
and the tail bugs me but shh don't listen to me, i'm not perfect!

I like it, I can actually feel the embrace of both of the characters.

I am new and I really like this pic I think u did awesome dude