Ha ha very nice lil' story :) That's what she gets for complaining!

If you do like transformations, and like sexiness then you might like one of my stories. I normally don't promote my own stuff in comments like this...but I really think you might like it.

Also just started watching you, some of your stuff is gonna be nice inspiration work for later writings :)

Thanks, it was a good idea, but our interests only just barely overlap; I'm all-out about tf with some smut thrown in, and you're all out about- well it ain't tf 0_o . Though, for the record it was the best stuff someone's asked me to read. Better luck next time. =)

Thanks for the +watch though.

Meh no problem, maybe some of my later TF revolving around stuff that I plan on doing (partially thanks to your stuff) you will like better.

Maybe. Depends what the focus is. Damn, I wish fetishes were all more compatible. I really do.

Sometimes I do too, hard to make something for everyone around here LOL But if I work on something specifically for you or someone of your tastes I bet I could nail it ;)

*nods* Though for every story that branches out a little, you alienate your fans a bit and attract new watchers who will be dissapointed with every new update. I'm not just musing, this actually happened to me like 4 times on DA.

Not that you can't tell them to shut up >=)

ROTFL I would much rather have people disappointed and give myself a broader range of writing ability (and thus possibly more chances for commissions) than to limit myself. Besides I want to get published! The more I write the better I get.

Good attitude. But published? Do you mean for more mainstream fiction, or for this? Cause this seems like an uphill battle.

Ha ha I mean for like this sort of fandom, private sales that sort of thing.

Ah. Same.

More frames? No, I don't think it needs them, I think it's fine as it is!

Sometimes it's best to end it "early" to leave the rest to the imagination of the reader!!

Actually I meant this whole page was originally supposed to be just one frame. =\ Btw, do you prefer tfs with epilogues or without?

Ahh right, out of curiosity what would this page have been if it was a single frame?

If you class this page as an epilogue, then yes, but if it's just part 2 then no this ending is the kind of thing I like!

The best kind of TFs (for me) are the ones where a) they don't want/expect it, or b) they want to be TFed but it doesn't work out how they thought it would ...

Schweet, we should get along. If I coulda thought of a single frame ending though, I woulda used it. =\

:o)

TFing has got to be one of the hottest things on this fine Earth!

I actually like the epilogue. I prefer a complete TF, i means, both body, mind and memory (Sadly. a lot of people dislike mind TF, but i love it)

I find a bit weird the "reality TF" (I means, everybody think about the girl always was a mare, changed the whole reality for able she to fitting her new life) but is ok for me.

Love the last pannel, i like the detail of her speech and thinks slowy gone and replace with the neigh of a silly horse, i like the removal of Human speech as sign of complete mind TF, sadly as only a bunch of artist doing it.

Good work :)

It wasn't supposed to be a reality tf, she was simply mistaken for her own horse by her dad.

And I agree with the mind tf thing, properly handled it can be the icing on the cake. "Properly handled" being the key phrase, it can screw up a good tf if it's even the tiniest bit off.

Well that's kind of a morbid ending... I can't help but wonder why he did it...

Oh he didn't do it; she said "I wish my horse could stay" and wound up being transformed and sold in the place of her horse, allowing it to stay. I probably should explain that, it's not too clear.

wow i really liked this one. i like your style for horses aswell. it sucks that you say your so uninspired

Actually I've had a lot of really good ideas recently =D , damn computer has been screwing it all up though. Don't worry, I'll catch a break sooner or later.

well if ya ever want to chat or talk ideas you got a listener here.

This was a really good sequence, hopefully she was taken to a good ranch, and not sold to a shadier place!

Hopefully...

I always love these comics...

Ah, my faithful stalker...

Here to lurk over yet another of your fantastic works...Garbed in merely a pink ninja outfit, he stalks the gallery of your profile in complete obviousness! He...Is Taenil!

I thought Valorail?

Taenil is my primary character wherever I'm at. I mediate through him. XD

I think overall it's one of your stronger sequences, but the last headshot's muzzle is far shorter than any of the other pictures. It could be a bad angle, but it still looks a bit strange.

Oh I see, for about half the frames I spaced her eyes really far apart, like a horse's, and that was one of them. The eyes and the hair are what's off in the last frame, they make it look like you're viewing it from the side, instead of the front.

Good call though; if it was a major frame, I'd definitely fix it.

Yes, it does seem like there is a little bit missing, as if there should be a little something more after this. None the less its still a good sequence as it stands.

Yeah, they all have that feeling I think... I dunno. I think a mind change is a good way to close a sequence. Where else could I end it.

Quite, quite nice! I love the way the 'rear' view of her still looks human, even when it's sporting a tail. You've mixed in just enough of her original proportions with the equine to remind us that who we're looking at was once human

Yeah that's a trick I learned a long time ago and never get sick of, if you angle it just right you can't see the animal proportions AND it still looks real. >=)

this has gotta be....ONE OF MY FAVORITE SEQUENCES!!!!! I can't stop looking at it. I especially love how she starts to get swoon by the stallions, and then how she finally gives in to the horse. I say if it IS missing something (Heaven forbid) it should be her finding a mate

Thanks, yeah that second page was a good idea. =)

ooh.....oooor: a backstory where her horse turns human.....technically allowing her to stay

I guess that the rear looks like a huge human butt. XDD Too bad it's not continued.

That's not an accident =) Anyway, even if it was continued, where could it go you know?

I know where!! She ends up meeting the horse that she misses so much and ends up mating with a male horse on the farm.

Well, I love to go with the touching endings. :)

Very cool story :) It was funny to enjoy it!

In your style I like that how you do her horse face. If I must pick something, only that you did her too thin. Horse usually are more massive. Maybe not fat, but massive. Thanks that how you draw her, her horse body looks more like human than mare.

But in general it's ok ;)

Yeah, I like tfs to end in more of a hybrid you know? There's lots of all-the-way horse tfs out there.

awww, the "previous' is borked. (404)

Good catch. *fixed*

I'd buy her just to fuck her from behind

I was left wondering what happened with her breasts.