"DONE! Wait, maybe I should add an extra frame or two, it seems incomplete."
And that's how this page came to be! Are the ridiculously long epilogues working for everyone? Just curious.
Btw, still sitting on a pile of other stuff. Have very little creative incentive, being back in art class. All this practice really paid off though, my mark on a recent drawing assignment read as follows: "OMGWTFBBQ?!" ...I might be paraphrasing.
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And that's how this page came to be! Are the ridiculously long epilogues working for everyone? Just curious.
Btw, still sitting on a pile of other stuff. Have very little creative incentive, being back in art class. All this practice really paid off though, my mark on a recent drawing assignment read as follows: "OMGWTFBBQ?!" ...I might be paraphrasing.
Page 1: [http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3423659/ Holy shit is it valentines day?! ARG there was so much possibilities! DX
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If you do like transformations, and like sexiness then you might like one of my stories. I normally don't promote my own stuff in comments like this...but I really think you might like it.
Also just started watching you, some of your stuff is gonna be nice inspiration work for later writings :)
Thanks for the +watch though.
Not that you can't tell them to shut up >=)
Sometimes it's best to end it "early" to leave the rest to the imagination of the reader!!
If you class this page as an epilogue, then yes, but if it's just part 2 then no this ending is the kind of thing I like!
The best kind of TFs (for me) are the ones where a) they don't want/expect it, or b) they want to be TFed but it doesn't work out how they thought it would ...
TFing has got to be one of the hottest things on this fine Earth!
I find a bit weird the "reality TF" (I means, everybody think about the girl always was a mare, changed the whole reality for able she to fitting her new life) but is ok for me.
Love the last pannel, i like the detail of her speech and thinks slowy gone and replace with the neigh of a silly horse, i like the removal of Human speech as sign of complete mind TF, sadly as only a bunch of artist doing it.
Good work :)
And I agree with the mind tf thing, properly handled it can be the icing on the cake. "Properly handled" being the key phrase, it can screw up a good tf if it's even the tiniest bit off.
Good call though; if it was a major frame, I'd definitely fix it.
Well, I love to go with the touching endings. :)
In your style I like that how you do her horse face. If I must pick something, only that you did her too thin. Horse usually are more massive. Maybe not fat, but massive. Thanks that how you draw her, her horse body looks more like human than mare.
But in general it's ok ;)