Thank you.

The only thing I could add hun is that the text is a bit abrasive. Hard to see what you have in your body cause letters tend to be jumbled and it could deter possible clients. ^^;;

Eh? Less text I take it and more space? I do tend to put in a bit too much explanation don't I? I like the Times New Roman font, though if you can suggest a less jumble prone font, please do.

What font size did you use? Its not that NTR is a standard font but on your ad space it seems like some of the words are overlapping and now if your printer/copier sucks you will have alot of bleeding and then we can't see what the heck you are talking about..If you ever need free fonts as long as you don't take credit for them I have a site you can use.
http://www.dafont.com/

And if I suggest anything Arial is a good font standard and you may want to go to up to even font 20 just to see how it will look but that is my opinion arf.

I took your suggestions, tell me what you think http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3424809

i JUST did hun *giggles blushing* xD