Here it is - the main story, i'll be contiuning this and have plenty of plot twists planned and have already started on the next bit.

I'm glad how it came out, comment and tell me what you think you guys! I need to know where i go wrong so i can improve for next time!

Just to tell you the next chapter will probally contain at least some violence - not much as i'm inexperienced in writing it but it's going to be mature so heck, thought i'd warn ya if you have that stuff blocked.
(If in the future anystorey contains adult stuff i'll make it a sidestorey as i want to keep the main storeyline as clean as pos)