You wouldn't mind sending me a copy of what you do have would you? Maybe I could make some suggestions on how to finish it.

Ah who am I kidding? I just want to read it. But can you blame me?

Welll... Maybe. It's pretty unpolished though.

Pleeeeeeease? Don't make me pull out the puppy eyes again (I'm terrible at it). You say unpolished, but really, thats like saying that a gold nugget isn't shiny enough.

I'll have to reformat it, and it's kinda late now. Possibly tomorrow.

I'm still not sure though. I really wanted to finish this one someday before anyone saw it...

How much more do you think you have to finish it?

Eh, quite a few chapters. I could send you some other stuff.

Understandable. Still would you consider it at least? If you're stuck on some part of it, I could maybe make some suggestions. And maybe by having someone read and comment on it, it would go to the front of your mind, and less hovering in the background, allowing you to finish it easier.

As a last resort, I shall unlesh the sad little foxie on you, even though I'm sure using him in this fashion violates the geneva convention on unfair warfare somehow.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k.....ng/sadfox1.jpg

Holy crap, how cute!! *want to pet the sadfox*

Well, I have finished off DL... We'll see. I'll have a look at it and see if it's at all salvageable. I did write it a long time ago, and it's bound to be riddled with embarassing errors.

Yay! I might get something new to read!

Did you write it before or after 'Against Instict'?

Only problem is with the move to the new house, I'll only be able to check my email once every week or so, so it could sit in my inbox for a week before I could read it.

I... am not sure. I *think* I started after Against Instinct, but that story took so long to write it's possible I didn't.

Sorry, but I'm kinda busy at the moment. I'm gonna try to proofread Down In The Dumps so I can post it next week, then do the same with Bartleby's Descent. We will see.

Ah, I was just asking because I didn't see any errors in 'Against Instinct' and it would follow that anything after that would have less errors.

Good luck on the proofreading, and expect a lot of coments on both of those, they're both really good ones.

Now that the editing is done for DL and the other stories (I assume it is anyway), think you have time for this one? It's got a really neat idea, and I'm sure It'd be a good read if finished.

You know, I hadn't even thought of it. Maybe. I do want to finish another Bartleby story too...

Ooooh, that sounds good. Either way it seems to be a win-win situation.

Quick question, and I'm wondering why I didn't notice it earlier. Why is the big guy, who I can't remember the name of, holding a sword?

He (Jared Ravensfire) collects them as a hobby. He also practices with them, to exercise his legs which are weakened from an accident he had as a kid.