This is my first story ever. My first time posting a story so i may have messed up on some of the plot so im sorry. i love Bergamo but i feel like there is not enough inflation art for him so i made this story. i love pants inflation and i dont really watch dragon ball z but when i saw him i fell in love with him immedeitly. critizism is useful and im sorry if you dont like this story. please enjoy. also i got the immage off google and i used google docs so i dont know what exactly to do.
Bergamo and Basil belongs to the creators of Dragon Ball Z.
I fixed some of the spelling errors and added paragraphs.
After I finished and read it, I saw some things I could do better on. So I updated some things. More detail here and there. A little more explanation for some scenes. more spelling fixes. Now as a text file so no need to download it. If it's not as good or worse then tell me and I will change it back to the original.
Bergamo and Basil belongs to the creators of Dragon Ball Z.
I fixed some of the spelling errors and added paragraphs.
After I finished and read it, I saw some things I could do better on. So I updated some things. More detail here and there. A little more explanation for some scenes. more spelling fixes. Now as a text file so no need to download it. If it's not as good or worse then tell me and I will change it back to the original.
Category Story / Inflation
Species Wolf
Size 93 x 120px
File Size 17.5 kB
No sure how much related the characters are with that kind of activity, but based of your other stories and your profile I can imagine that you enjoyed their character designs a bunch and the baggy pants that DragonBall characters tend to wear fit quite well with your fantasies. Was a neato start of submissions, dude. ^_^
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