Pretty nice :3

好看漂亮 :3

thanks x3

謝謝 x3

^w^

not that, I konw... me have see digimon, you look.

不是，我知道...我已经看到数码宝贝，你看看。
http://games.softpedia.com/screensh.....s/1-2839_1.jpg

i've seen that XD

我見過的 XD

haha, ok... XD

哈哈... ok... XD

Wow, this looks nice!

hehe thanks wynny x3

Is that a reference to pit? X3

The pic came out nicely Timmi, the background came out pretty good :3

reference to pit? i dunnoe what you're talking about :P

nyaahahaha thanks x3

Pit from Super Smash Brothers Brawl X3

aww i dunnoe that guy D:

Nice Colors! :D Good job!

hehe thanks x3

Some of the lines look a little wobbleh, did you use the Curve tool or did you do it by Pen? You shouldn't be using the Pen tool for lineart if you can pop out a vector layer and Curve it up. D:


I think there are too many feathers on screen at one time. It's like he's molting. What also bothers me a bit is that there is shading inside of the wings but not on the body at all...Or at least that's what my worn eyes tell me.


Besides that it's fine really. o:

haha that's the worst thing i've ever done! still exploring SAI though. i'm not thinking straight like those wobbleh lines thar. D:

molting. haha i knew it. i shouldnt have put 6 more feathers in there. too bad the shading on the body isnt visible enough. stupid blur tool making things too.... blurred. XD

nyaaa thanks x3

The Blur tool is good, but not often for shading. At least for me. o:


I suggest cell shading...It's when you use the same color for the skin/body part your coloring, and make it slightly darker. Then use Pen or Marker tool to color in the shading. A really lazy but pretty way to shade. I do it alot, lol.


And no problem. I'm glad there are people around here who like critique. :D

haha i'm gonna try cellshading next. it looks fun to do... after final exams next week. :3

critiques can be a pain the ass, but at least there's a big lesson to be learned from it x3

Fly doggie! O3o

Anyway, like what wildside had said, I have a bit of problem looking at the shading, specially in the wings. Balance shading is a must, determine the source of light in the picture and apply the shading on where the light isn't supposed to be. Like in this picture, the source of light is supposed to be on the back of Zun, if that source is the sun. I don't think spotlights are available at the picture's time of the day. Anyway, moving on. The shading is supposed to be in front of Zun, of course not that dim as in you're almost changing the fur color.

And the lines, ink pen or the normal brush tool with right brush size is the best tool for doing linearts in SAI, by my experience.

But the picture is fine! I love it! Fly doggie! O3o

nyaaa!! it's always the shading.. i'll get to that next time x3

it's supposed to be FLY WOLFIE! O3o

B-but! D': *teary eyes* Doggie...

aww... okay okay.. doggie :\

Doggie! *pounces*

*ish pounced* oof~

*snuggles and purrs*

*giggles* x3

heehee! <3

nice! Stepping up on your art it seems :D

yeash miming! :D
kelan ka punta dito? XD

march or april... or june

balik na ko davao this year >:)

YAY! 8D

wai diay? mang libre ka ice cream? :P

pwede basta punta ka lang dito XD

wohoooo! XD ima crash at your crib again ^_^