EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE........HELLO MOTHER FOXY........

AND well done on your part, have not read it yet, i am busy away with my series. I'll et to it.
*Paw cramps*......"Ouch, that's my wanking paw!"......"I mean....whistling paw ".

*smacks him a good one...

V.

"No mommy, not the stingy buttocks"....He he

Intriguing. I think this needs to be submitted to text books and be the accepted form of teaching biology...A little evolution, a little divine intervention...EVERYONE SHOULD BE HAPPY

*chuckles... thank you I think...

*hugs...

V.

Yes, that was a compliment

*gives her a big hug...

V.

heh *is smothered by hug* Thank you

That... was bleedin' incredible, Vixyy... and I mean that sincerely.

*hugs tightly*

smiles so very big... thank you Seht... really really....

hugs...

V.

Hm... biblical yet sci-fi'ish.

and ghostish... *chuckles...

thanks for reading hun...

V.

horray!!!!

bloody excellent^^

*smiles and gives him a big hug... thank you so very much...

V.

Interesting, though a little confusing in some parts :P I liked it!

*smiles... thank you Dabs....

V.

On the day the creation of the world ends, god and devil stand side by side, devil tossing a coin in the air, god saying: "Okay, tails: I get to be the evil one..."

Very nice... mysterious... I think I should read this again after a few days or so. Very interesting view to the whole god and devil and creation thing. I enjoyed reading this very much. Good work.

*gives him a big hug... God and the Devil are two of my very favorite characters to write about, and through this I have learned much.

V.

Oooo! Great spin at the end there, Miss V. I have to admit, I was a bit slow in figuring it out(had to read it through a second time), but once I did. Whoa, creepy.

*smiles so very big... it did have a twist, and at the end, as I was staring through His eyes, it was so very sad.

V.

Verrah, verrah nice.

*smiles so very big.... and curtsies...

thank ya kind sir...

*giggles...

V.

Look at me, procrastinating so... Reading stories on FA...

Anyway, I REALLY REALLY liked this piece. i actually had to read the second and third pages ten times, and I'm not really sure what they mean (course, its not obvious). Very thought provoking. One thing I wondered, is the devil "really there" or is he a hallucination of the ghost in question? Because that changes the meaning of the story depending on what was intended.

*chuckles... much of what is there is meant to make you think... in fact, when I wrote it, I was wondering about much of it myself... what message was meant to come out, and in the final line... I was looking through his eyes and out into that empty delapidated building.

V.

A very intriguing read!

~GR

*smiles and gives her a hug... thanks so much hun...

V.

*Smirks and twirls a large key around finger*

*smiles with him; keeping an eye on the key...

V.

Hey, maybe Turrentwolfie already credited, but the art is actually from Dark Natasha I believe, or Goldenwolf, wanted to be sure you credit the appropriate artist

It's nice that you wish to protect artists, but if you had done any actual research into your suggestion, you would have found that Dark is an old friend, and I have been using this image since I came here in 2007. Now I have a question for you. Did you even read the story, or are you just our shaking trees?

Vix

Fam my comment was meant kindly, there is no credit to Natasha so I gave a heads up, Natasha let my use a character she created as a RP claim and Immade sure her name was up front as the artist, there’s no need to get defensive off the bat like this.