this is still a work in progress story i aint even done with it so ask some ?'s if you have any k but i do have the plot now i just need the story done and were in buisness lol:
plot
this is about a filly who is named Kaya and is seprated from her herd and trying to get back to her mom and dad and friends. along the way she meets Josefina the field mouse, Renn and Running legs a indian girl and a mare, and then she mets a outcast named davey who was part of her dads heard ( and her brother). in the story they meet countlesly and they meet with bad manner towared each other. they fight until one is down ( the winner is manly Kaya) later on she'll meet a mischevious and inconsideret gray colt who has his own adgenda to attend but wants to help kaya ( to bad she seems to hate him for just being him lol) but as time progreses they might become friends or even a couple? but wait and see. the journy was suposedly going to be only 5 days but the constent fights and safty issues has the journy taken an unexpected turn for the worst just wait till i finish.
hope you like what i have so far leave comments and maby some ideas k.
plot
this is about a filly who is named Kaya and is seprated from her herd and trying to get back to her mom and dad and friends. along the way she meets Josefina the field mouse, Renn and Running legs a indian girl and a mare, and then she mets a outcast named davey who was part of her dads heard ( and her brother). in the story they meet countlesly and they meet with bad manner towared each other. they fight until one is down ( the winner is manly Kaya) later on she'll meet a mischevious and inconsideret gray colt who has his own adgenda to attend but wants to help kaya ( to bad she seems to hate him for just being him lol) but as time progreses they might become friends or even a couple? but wait and see. the journy was suposedly going to be only 5 days but the constent fights and safty issues has the journy taken an unexpected turn for the worst just wait till i finish.
hope you like what i have so far leave comments and maby some ideas k.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 40.5 kB
Well sounds like a good grasp of anthropomorphics in older form. Seems to have interesting characters as well and a usable unique plot. Be careful with Kaya's characterization for main character feminism can cause a unbalance in the rhetorical sense of Anima vs. Animus archetype wise. Best of luck with the rest.
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