Heh, it's been a long time since I wrote anything. (Excuses out the way first)
This is a story, that's loosely based on me...Using anthro characters to 'augment' people from my life.
Anyhoo, this is Chapter 1, Scene 1. It's not 'finished', as I've got a bit of revision to do yet, but I'd like to know what others think of it. I know it's not the most 'descriptive' style going, but hey, can't all be purrfect.
Reason I'm uploading it? I've asked some, and they've told me it's good.
I'm hoping it is, but even if I get negative feedback, I'm gonna keep going with it. It's a very long story, and will even have multiple parts. Hehe, it's ambitious yeah, but I've never done things small-scale, so why start now?
Anyhoo, I'm not gonna say what else is coming up in the story, just that it's gonna have something for everyone...And I'm gonna enjoy doing it.
Doesn't matter how it's told, just that it is told.
So, have a read, and lemme know watcha think.
I have re-uploaded this file as RTF file...Cause the ' and " symbols were not showing properly, even with Notepad. So, download, have a read and lemme know what ya think :)
If you would like to comment, could you please comment on this upload...
As I'm going to delete the other two, for when I've got them all done, I'll re-upload here with the full Chapter 1. Thanks :)
(Last updated 5th May 2010. Put in scraps, as full chapter uploaded.)
This is a story, that's loosely based on me...Using anthro characters to 'augment' people from my life.
Anyhoo, this is Chapter 1, Scene 1. It's not 'finished', as I've got a bit of revision to do yet, but I'd like to know what others think of it. I know it's not the most 'descriptive' style going, but hey, can't all be purrfect.
Reason I'm uploading it? I've asked some, and they've told me it's good.
I'm hoping it is, but even if I get negative feedback, I'm gonna keep going with it. It's a very long story, and will even have multiple parts. Hehe, it's ambitious yeah, but I've never done things small-scale, so why start now?
Anyhoo, I'm not gonna say what else is coming up in the story, just that it's gonna have something for everyone...And I'm gonna enjoy doing it.
Doesn't matter how it's told, just that it is told.
So, have a read, and lemme know watcha think.
I have re-uploaded this file as RTF file...Cause the ' and " symbols were not showing properly, even with Notepad. So, download, have a read and lemme know what ya think :)
If you would like to comment, could you please comment on this upload...
As I'm going to delete the other two, for when I've got them all done, I'll re-upload here with the full Chapter 1. Thanks :)
(Last updated 5th May 2010. Put in scraps, as full chapter uploaded.)
Category Story / All
Species Lion
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 21.4 kB
Thanks for the positive comments :)
I've done what you suggested and uploaded it as RTF. I did that before, but was wondering whether anyone would 'bother' to download it and read it.
But as it's easier to read with RTF, then that's what I'm gonna do in future too.
Anyhoo, thankies and I'm onto chapter 2 now...Just need some revision to the 2nd part of Chapter 1 and I'll upload it.
I've done what you suggested and uploaded it as RTF. I did that before, but was wondering whether anyone would 'bother' to download it and read it.
But as it's easier to read with RTF, then that's what I'm gonna do in future too.
Anyhoo, thankies and I'm onto chapter 2 now...Just need some revision to the 2nd part of Chapter 1 and I'll upload it.
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