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Me and 
tjwatts are doing a war. I'm starting off.
tjwatts are doing a war. I'm starting off.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 22.5 kB
I don't mean to be a downer, but it was much too short with horrible pacing. There was little to no real description of the character, or the world. A bit more description of the other side of the portal would've helped greatly. the whole thing felt like a hit and run; it happens so quick that you're not sure what happened.
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